Robin Hood's Dream
A vision of the future that Robin did not like.4 total reviews
Comment from LynnetteOK
This is great! Who better than Robin Hood to speak out against "Trumpet" and what he's done? You made a huge political statement without adding to the division that's become such a huge part of this country. For what it's worth I agree with you
Best of luck in the contest. ð???
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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This is great! Who better than Robin Hood to speak out against "Trumpet" and what he's done? You made a huge political statement without adding to the division that's become such a huge part of this country. For what it's worth I agree with you
Best of luck in the contest. ð???
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for your read and your encouraging words.
Comment from w.j.debi
Poor Robin Hood, seeing such visions of the future would frighten anyone who cares about the abuses of the poor. But he has enough on his hands with King John and the Sheriff of Nottingham.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
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Poor Robin Hood, seeing such visions of the future would frighten anyone who cares about the abuses of the poor. But he has enough on his hands with King John and the Sheriff of Nottingham.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from Insignificant Weed
Ho, ho, ho. An "awful" dream indeed. Robin's merry men were sure that something like this could not happen. It is hard to imagine a leader that espouses: "Selfishness is the smart man's mode of operation" and expect to be a respected leader. This is so very clever and appropriate and delivered with tongue in cheek. I just have a question about the comma in this line: "He even took to berating, the hard working town criers" - there is no suggested break indicated unless I am missing something. I am new at this reviewing thing, so I might be out of order. Thanks for sharing - this is really OUTSTANDING
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Ho, ho, ho. An "awful" dream indeed. Robin's merry men were sure that something like this could not happen. It is hard to imagine a leader that espouses: "Selfishness is the smart man's mode of operation" and expect to be a respected leader. This is so very clever and appropriate and delivered with tongue in cheek. I just have a question about the comma in this line: "He even took to berating, the hard working town criers" - there is no suggested break indicated unless I am missing something. I am new at this reviewing thing, so I might be out of order. Thanks for sharing - this is really OUTSTANDING
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thank you again for the wonderful review and your comments.
Comment from Van
What a wonderful tribute to the form. Kind of like Animal Farm but in reverse (George Orwell). Poor Robin to have had a nightmare about Trumpet. haha... This will make a great water cooler topic for quite some time. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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What a wonderful tribute to the form. Kind of like Animal Farm but in reverse (George Orwell). Poor Robin to have had a nightmare about Trumpet. haha... This will make a great water cooler topic for quite some time. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Again thanks for the encouraging words and the rating.
