The War Ended Long Ago
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
The healing touch of a soulmate's hand ... there is no substitute and no medical explanation, but it is there and it is real. Your words are a beautiful description of just such a miracle.
And, yes, anyone who has a soulmate has their own mental picture that accompanies your words and, as such, no picture is necessary... they are inside each of us. :) :)
Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with us!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
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The healing touch of a soulmate's hand ... there is no substitute and no medical explanation, but it is there and it is real. Your words are a beautiful description of just such a miracle.
And, yes, anyone who has a soulmate has their own mental picture that accompanies your words and, as such, no picture is necessary... they are inside each of us. :) :)
Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with us!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Raul1
There are no grammatical mistakes in this poem. The lines rhyme and they match the poetry. No one wins in wars, but battles can be won. I like this poem. Excellent work!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
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There are no grammatical mistakes in this poem. The lines rhyme and they match the poetry. No one wins in wars, but battles can be won. I like this poem. Excellent work!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your review.
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You're welcome.
