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Bouncing Beach Balls

Tongue Twister - Alliteration

7 total reviews 
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Perfectly done as I followed Billy's bouncing balls. Excellent for the contest and you rhymed it also. Love the picture you chose to go with it making it a great piece

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Thanks so much Barb.
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

Well, what can I say about this? Perhaps a predominance for the letter 'B'. Maybe try to shake it up a little? lol

this is a very good tongue twister, and it rolls very nicely.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
    Thanks for the good review. Appreciate it.
Comment from jenintorre
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This a great tongue twister. I tried and could say it after a couple of tries but with difficulty. I think you should do really well in the competition although nobody knows how these things can go.
Good luck and best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
    Thanks so much! It was fun to do.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This is an excellent contest entry. The best tongue twister I know is:

Wine, when I'm well, makes me ill.
Wine, when I'm ill, makes me well.

It looks easy, but no one can say it.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
    Hahaha. Good one. Try your hand at it Thomas. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Larry the Bard
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This is completely, resolutely, wow harder than it looks that is all I have... fun write and my head eploded about half way through this tongue twister and I'm still untwisting... great job.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
    Hahaha. Such fun to craft these silly things. But its great for keeping us lighthearted and sane. I appreciate your comments and fun review.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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Short and sweet; a nice entry for this kind of contest. I have never tried a tongue twister but this sounds just like a good one.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
    Thanks Donna. Since its summer, I?ve seen lots of beach balls..... and babies at the pool. I just thought all those b?s should hand together for a bit. I appreciate the good review.
Comment from Gloria ....
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What a fun tongue twister this is, author. Billy Bray sounds like a boy who genuinely loves his balls, on the beach of course.

Very nicely written and I wish you great luck in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
    Haha, thanks Gloria.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018
    Btw Gloria, I?m trying very hard to craft a sonnet, and I?m so unsure of myself. Can you recommend a site that could teach me about the cadence? I admire your sonnets and wish it weren?t so hard to write one.