My secret hobby
Can't wait for Tuesdays.38 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"This is a 'Share a Story' in a poem contest Entree.'
"It was rich in Theme as well as Imagery.'
"It read and Flowed Well."
"No Grammar Issues."
"Adjective and Objective Contents were excellent."
"Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
"Good luck."
"Dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
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"This is a 'Share a Story' in a poem contest Entree.'
"It was rich in Theme as well as Imagery.'
"It read and Flowed Well."
"No Grammar Issues."
"Adjective and Objective Contents were excellent."
"Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
"Good luck."
"Dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Nicely written poem very nice flow. I didn't see
any Corrections that need to be made. Nice imagery good word choices and I think you just did an overall very good job.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Nicely written poem very nice flow. I didn't see
any Corrections that need to be made. Nice imagery good word choices and I think you just did an overall very good job.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for your comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello jenintorre,
It's a nice piece of Humor Poetry having lucid phraseology, smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Hello jenintorre,
It's a nice piece of Humor Poetry having lucid phraseology, smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Many thanks. I really appreciate your comments and super 6 stars.
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Hello Jenintorre,
Most Welcome!
~ RP
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO JENINTORRE: I can relate to your poem here because it ls so true to real life. I've imagined that there are not many married couples who can't relate to just where you're coming from. It's sooo real, and to the point. Thank you for sharing this true to marriage message. Well done, Jenintotte. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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HELLO JENINTORRE: I can relate to your poem here because it ls so true to real life. I've imagined that there are not many married couples who can't relate to just where you're coming from. It's sooo real, and to the point. Thank you for sharing this true to marriage message. Well done, Jenintotte. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for your comments
Comment from The Death
This was a fun poem to read! Excellent rhyming makes the flow fluid. Poor Bobby doesn't know about his wife's hobby. LOL. I liked the simplicity of this poem and the twist you bring in the end. You told an entertaining story in this poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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This was a fun poem to read! Excellent rhyming makes the flow fluid. Poor Bobby doesn't know about his wife's hobby. LOL. I liked the simplicity of this poem and the twist you bring in the end. You told an entertaining story in this poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Many thanks. So glad you liked it. Jen.
Comment from Tootie
Ha Ha! This is awesome. It was moving along and I didn't have a clue until the end. This is a great share a story in a poem. Love the humor. Wishing you the best in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Ha Ha! This is awesome. It was moving along and I didn't have a clue until the end. This is a great share a story in a poem. Love the humor. Wishing you the best in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much, glad you liked it.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your sense of humor with this story poem. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains, which I thought were autobiographical, until I got to the final stanza, which I certainly did not anticipate! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thank you for sharing your sense of humor with this story poem. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains, which I thought were autobiographical, until I got to the final stanza, which I certainly did not anticipate! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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So pleased you liked it. Thanks.
Comment from BeasPeas
Super job on this well written poem. Flows right along with a jaunty pace. The poem rhymes well and is amusing. Presentation is cute, too. Good luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Super job on this well written poem. Flows right along with a jaunty pace. The poem rhymes well and is amusing. Presentation is cute, too. Good luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Many thanks Marilyn. So pleased you liked it.
Comment from tfawcus
Goodness! I hope that he doesn't read your poetry! LOL. A nice jaunty rhythm to go with the humour of this one. Poetic justice that you both have your once a week ball game.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Goodness! I hope that he doesn't read your poetry! LOL. A nice jaunty rhythm to go with the humour of this one. Poetic justice that you both have your once a week ball game.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thanks for your great and funny comments Tony, I loved them. Cheers Jen.
Comment from royowen
I love this very naughty poem, smoothly written in abcb rhyming, which is the best format for this deliciously naughty story in a poem entry. Poor Bobby, I'd "dob" you in if I knew your address, heh heh, and excellent work dear friend Jen, I know it's tongue in cheek...or is it? Well done, good luck. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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I love this very naughty poem, smoothly written in abcb rhyming, which is the best format for this deliciously naughty story in a poem entry. Poor Bobby, I'd "dob" you in if I knew your address, heh heh, and excellent work dear friend Jen, I know it's tongue in cheek...or is it? Well done, good luck. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thanks for your great review. I really appreciate it
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Most welcome
