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Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Untold"A Romantic, Superhero-like, Geek Horror story.
3 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is excellent. You're writing is professional quality with no grammar or spelling errors. Very few writers are this talented.
"That I'm simple. Patient. And, I'm in love with her."
This is a great answer. Who could want more from a piece of folded paper?
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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This is excellent. You're writing is professional quality with no grammar or spelling errors. Very few writers are this talented.
"That I'm simple. Patient. And, I'm in love with her."
This is a great answer. Who could want more from a piece of folded paper?
Comment Written 29-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018
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Thank you! Your compliment and review is respected and received. I appreciate both your time and attention for taking the time to read my piece. This made my weekend. :)
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Thank you! Your compliment and review is respected and received. I appreciate both your time and attention for taking the time to read my piece. This made my weekend. :)
Comment from Miranda Langston
i really enjoyed reading this piece. i very much liked the amusing dialogue and the girly sweater you described. hehe :D i swear i almost laughed out loud
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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i really enjoyed reading this piece. i very much liked the amusing dialogue and the girly sweater you described. hehe :D i swear i almost laughed out loud
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the generous rating. I love it when I hear reviews that made the reader laugh. I try to balance everything in my writing, which includes laughter. Thank you!
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Thank you for the generous rating. I love it when I hear reviews that made the reader laugh. I try to balance everything in my writing, which includes laughter. Thank you!
Comment from kahpot
Very well written I have read some of this before and will now have to go back and catch up, as I remember these characters I believe, I read at the title PT1 and thought I had found the beginning, I missed the part that said a chapter >>> I still found this to be a wonderful read and will definitely refresh****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Very well written I have read some of this before and will now have to go back and catch up, as I remember these characters I believe, I read at the title PT1 and thought I had found the beginning, I missed the part that said a chapter >>> I still found this to be a wonderful read and will definitely refresh****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you again! It gets more interesting! Hope to hear more of your insight on previous chapters. Thank you again for your continued attention! :)
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Thank you again! It gets more interesting! Hope to hear more of your insight on previous chapters. Thank you again for your continued attention! :)
