Faith in you
My belief32 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are encouraging, hopeful,
and filled with meaning. The artwork is perfect and compliments
the words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are encouraging, hopeful,
and filled with meaning. The artwork is perfect and compliments
the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent five line poem for the contest Kahpot. Vivid imagery in just a few short words to convey your message. "faith alone will guide me" is an beautiful introspective thought.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Excellent five line poem for the contest Kahpot. Vivid imagery in just a few short words to convey your message. "faith alone will guide me" is an beautiful introspective thought.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Air Spirit
Beautifully written --- image is stunning and spectacular... your poem is filled with carefully selected words, and a fluid, coherent and a meaningful message... which is hard to do within the limitation of the form (5 line poem)... You have done an excellent job on this, and I can tell you put allot of thought into this -- it paid off!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Beautifully written --- image is stunning and spectacular... your poem is filled with carefully selected words, and a fluid, coherent and a meaningful message... which is hard to do within the limitation of the form (5 line poem)... You have done an excellent job on this, and I can tell you put allot of thought into this -- it paid off!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from victor 66
I respect your faith and I enjoy your poetry. Stating such faith with such continuity and clarity in a five line poem is a gift. I wish you luck in this contest, Kahpot... and am look forward to reading your work again. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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I respect your faith and I enjoy your poetry. Stating such faith with such continuity and clarity in a five line poem is a gift. I wish you luck in this contest, Kahpot... and am look forward to reading your work again. Best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You are most welcome.
Comment from godlucifer
life is a opportunity. in faith,in life is our opportunity. in guidance,in faith is our opportunity in life. in guidance,we are lead to that opportunity which is life. your poem was well told and well said. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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life is a opportunity. in faith,in life is our opportunity. in guidance,in faith is our opportunity in life. in guidance,we are lead to that opportunity which is life. your poem was well told and well said. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO KAHPOT: I like your work here. It reminds me of a passage that I read in my Holy Bible. "If you have, "FAITH," the size of a mustard seed; your faith can move a mountain." You will find this passage at: MATTHEW 21:21. If you read the entire verse, you will hear a more detailed meaning of what I'm trying to show you, from the mouth of, Jesus, Himself. If you find time, read that verse, Kahpot. Then you can see just how witty your work here is. It "IS"
witty...and so are you. Very, very well done my brother. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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HELLO KAHPOT: I like your work here. It reminds me of a passage that I read in my Holy Bible. "If you have, "FAITH," the size of a mustard seed; your faith can move a mountain." You will find this passage at: MATTHEW 21:21. If you read the entire verse, you will hear a more detailed meaning of what I'm trying to show you, from the mouth of, Jesus, Himself. If you find time, read that verse, Kahpot. Then you can see just how witty your work here is. It "IS"
witty...and so are you. Very, very well done my brother. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, and I shall read Mathew 2121, this is very encouraging and helpful****kahpot
Comment from Robbie Yates
Great poem. Your use of shape is wonderful, Kahpot, and your placement of the rhyme (course / source) within the structure of the poem somehow just seemed perfect. Well done and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Great poem. Your use of shape is wonderful, Kahpot, and your placement of the rhyme (course / source) within the structure of the poem somehow just seemed perfect. Well done and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from jenintorre
Hi there Kahpot
These are very profound words that you have written. I don't understand the artwork but hey ho, doesn't matter. The five line poem is very well written. I wish you good luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Hi there Kahpot
These are very profound words that you have written. I don't understand the artwork but hey ho, doesn't matter. The five line poem is very well written. I wish you good luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Tootie
I totally agree! Keep the faith - it'll get you through. I really like this 5 line poem. The artwork is awesome too! Wishing you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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I totally agree! Keep the faith - it'll get you through. I really like this 5 line poem. The artwork is awesome too! Wishing you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from livelylinda
kahpot: when I find myself struggling with life's hurts and confusion, I know to open the door wide for the spirit of God to lead me. This poem, so beautifully yet simply written, tells this story. Very well written! livelylinda
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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kahpot: when I find myself struggling with life's hurts and confusion, I know to open the door wide for the spirit of God to lead me. This poem, so beautifully yet simply written, tells this story. Very well written! livelylinda
Comment Written 19-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
