Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation, Deborah.
-You have used your six words well.
-I like the message of making each day "a delight."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018

Thank you.

reply by Pam (respa) on 18-Jul-2018

You are welcome.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Such a wonderful message in only six words....Great job!! :) :) I especially love your use of the word "festive" - such an awesome choice! It changes the entire feel of your compilation.....and paired with those lovely daylilies, you have a great entry here! :) :) I would suggest removing the punctuation marks completely as your line arrangement is enough ...... :)

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

Thank you for your suggestion about the punctuation. I was thinking too that it would be better without. Nice to have a second opinion.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Good maxim for life...make each day ..festive a delight....what a wonderful thought and a great way to live life to the fullest...flowers do it ..why can't we..
Tomorrow I am going to be more focused on festive
Thanks
God bless

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

Thank you. I'm happy my poem inspired you. I'm working on being more festive too.

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello Mia, what a delightful poem for this 5-7-5 poetry contest and best of luck with your well-written entry. I enjoyed the lovely picture you've chosen to accompany your writing, and your word choices are excellent. I have no suggestions for improvement and thanks for sharing your lovely writing, Ana.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018

Thank you so much for reviewing and considering my poem well-written.

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very nice six word poem and i love the art work and this was creative and i hope for the best in the contest

thank you for sharing this well penned work donette1914 july 15 2018

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018

Thank you for reading. Isn't it fun to be creative!

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

I enjoyed this poem. It has an infectious positivity about it, you know? Thanks for brightening my day, and best of luck to you in the contest.

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018

Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Donka Kristeva

Excellent

A blessing in a poem and art work! Six words make a positive, empowering statement, and that is something to be grateful for.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018

Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem.

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

Their is an excellent message conveyed here. I like the inspirational nature of this. We should do exactly as you've instructed. We only have the day because we have no guarantee of tomorrow. You've done a superb job with this well written poem. Well done Miajaffri!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018

Thank you so much.

Comment from Michael Steinert

Excellent

You conveyed so much in simply six words which is so so difficult to do. This was a pleasure to read and has a great message. Also I love the color scheme and picture choosen. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018

Thank yo so much.