Hey don't squash little Joey.
Kangaroo, careful what you do.3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-six-one poem, Hey, Don't Squash Little Joey, works with the eight syllables to imagine the negotiation of movements made by Mama Kangaroo when carrying the pup around in a bouncy pouch. Funny.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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This one-six-one poem, Hey, Don't Squash Little Joey, works with the eight syllables to imagine the negotiation of movements made by Mama Kangaroo when carrying the pup around in a bouncy pouch. Funny.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for reviewing Bill.
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, I bet it would be tough to go about one's ordinary business with a little baby Roo in the below the belt pouch.
Great fun with a most original onesixtyone and good luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Ha, I bet it would be tough to go about one's ordinary business with a little baby Roo in the below the belt pouch.
Great fun with a most original onesixtyone and good luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Many thanks Gloria
Comment from Lady Jane
Now that's a piece of "technical" poetry. That's when you take your work to the bare bones and convey a strong point with minimal syllables. Excellent entry. I see nothing to revise. Cute pic/poem combo. Nicely done. Good job and good luck.
Janelle
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Now that's a piece of "technical" poetry. That's when you take your work to the bare bones and convey a strong point with minimal syllables. Excellent entry. I see nothing to revise. Cute pic/poem combo. Nicely done. Good job and good luck.
Janelle
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Many thanks
