Confused
Life is so frustrating8 total reviews
Comment from donette1914
very well written with deep emotion and i thought you did amazing job.
Thank you for sharing this well penned work of your's and it is a honor to read your work donette1914 july 16 2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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very well written with deep emotion and i thought you did amazing job.
Thank you for sharing this well penned work of your's and it is a honor to read your work donette1914 july 16 2018
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Jen. This is a good entry for the contest. Maybe you are an emu? I think they are a flightless bird or a domestic turkey. I remember a hilarious TV show called WKRP Cincinnati in which they once had a Thanksgiving episode. They ran an advertising campaign where they threw live turkeys out of helicopters. They thought they could fly. Maybe you hadda be there. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Hi Jen. This is a good entry for the contest. Maybe you are an emu? I think they are a flightless bird or a domestic turkey. I remember a hilarious TV show called WKRP Cincinnati in which they once had a Thanksgiving episode. They ran an advertising campaign where they threw live turkeys out of helicopters. They thought they could fly. Maybe you hadda be there. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thanks Pam for the great review
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful, sometimes we get like this thinking we can't proceed and we just gt stuck unable to do anything " confused and helpless" this is an ecellent5-7-5 poem and entry best wishes for your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Wonderful, sometimes we get like this thinking we can't proceed and we just gt stuck unable to do anything " confused and helpless" this is an ecellent5-7-5 poem and entry best wishes for your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Many thanks Kahpot. Much appreciated
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello jenintorre
your poem about being confused sounds like you and the bird have not found the places or places to fly and find happiness.
I like your thought made me ponder.
Where is happiness found?
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Hello jenintorre
your poem about being confused sounds like you and the bird have not found the places or places to fly and find happiness.
I like your thought made me ponder.
Where is happiness found?
Gert
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for your great review
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Smiles to you jenintorre
Gert
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow! So much said in those three lines -- awesome! :) :) It gives a beautiful overall image that might work even better if you switched your title and the tag line....let the poem be entitled "Life is so Frustrating"....dunno, probably a crazy idea. :) :) But it certainly doesn't change the profound statement of the prose itself -- that is really well done! :) :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Wow! So much said in those three lines -- awesome! :) :) It gives a beautiful overall image that might work even better if you switched your title and the tag line....let the poem be entitled "Life is so Frustrating"....dunno, probably a crazy idea. :) :) But it certainly doesn't change the profound statement of the prose itself -- that is really well done! :) :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for your. great review and suggestion.
Comment from BeasPeas
A well illustrated and worded 5-7-5. Fine entry for the contest. I don't know if this is biographical or not, but the only one who can get ourselves out of our moods is ourselves. Positive thinking is where it's at for me. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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A well illustrated and worded 5-7-5. Fine entry for the contest. I don't know if this is biographical or not, but the only one who can get ourselves out of our moods is ourselves. Positive thinking is where it's at for me. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thanks Marilyn. It's not biographical. I just saw a bird in my garden and the poem came into my head. Iam actually pretty positive. Hugs
Comment from phill doran
Hello Jenintorre
Very good. This is actually the second piece I have read today (the other was a very different format) using a flightless bird as an analogy for the frustration of unrealized ambition: it is a clear image here and you have used it well. The rhyme, in such a small space, makes the piece flow as a single thought
Your form is correct and I wish you well in your contest.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Hello Jenintorre
Very good. This is actually the second piece I have read today (the other was a very different format) using a flightless bird as an analogy for the frustration of unrealized ambition: it is a clear image here and you have used it well. The rhyme, in such a small space, makes the piece flow as a single thought
Your form is correct and I wish you well in your contest.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for your greay review
Comment from papa55mike
This is very well-written and the picture is wonderful. I love the expressive, lonely feel of this poem, the pain of being lost and looked over. Great job!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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This is very well-written and the picture is wonderful. I love the expressive, lonely feel of this poem, the pain of being lost and looked over. Great job!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for your great review
