Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional

A great descriptive write with perfect artwork to match Trisha, and geat Haiku entry for the contest and I wish you luck, you painted a perfect painting of the clouds here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018

Wow! Thanks so much, Dolly. I never realized the beautiful variations of clouds offered by nature. I appreciate your great review, and of course, the ? heavenly? six stars,
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from damommy

Excellent

What I know about haikus you could put on the head of a pin. This is lovely and I think it meets requirements.

You've certainly give a great description of this phenomenon. I've never seen anything like it. Thank you for showing this.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018

Haiku has 3 lines, tradionally
5 syllables,
7 syllables
5 syllables
It does not have to rhyme
Often uses nature as the subject, writing should be able to ?stand alone? and create an image as if there was no picture. Hope this helps. Thanks for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

That is a fascinating cloud formation isn't it? But seeing is believing and your fine haiku illustrates the geometry involved in the fluffy white layers.

Excellent and best wishes to you in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018

Thank you very much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Nature certainly can display some beautiful art at times and your excellent Haiku has captured this photo beautifully, very well done and best wishes in your competition****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018

FS has given me more of a reason to enjoy nature by searching for subjects to post. I never realized the variety of cloud formation before. Thank you kahpot for reviewing so kindly, and I?m very glad you enjoyed my choice.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

The picture is interesting but looks fake. I have heard of these clouds. Good topic for a haiku. I would not use capital letters & you have 19 syllables. I believe the max number is 17. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018

Corrected , thanks for your helpful review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Robbie Yates

Excellent

Ooh - fascinating picture and great haiku. "Nature's high altitude art" is a great line. Thanks for sharing another brilliant poem, and good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018

That?s extremely kind of you Robbie, I am really honored by your compliments. Thank you for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha