Goodbyes
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Comment from Pantygynt
How strange. I have a eucalyptus tree in my garden that was given to me by a dear friend some years ago. She is gone now and this spring the tree really struggled to put on new growth. I thought it had had it but like the tree in your poem it's trying. So this poem really reesonated with me.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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How strange. I have a eucalyptus tree in my garden that was given to me by a dear friend some years ago. She is gone now and this spring the tree really struggled to put on new growth. I thought it had had it but like the tree in your poem it's trying. So this poem really reesonated with me.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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That means so much to me! Your insight is always spot on. Blessings, Lo
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Goodbyes, touches me deeply as I recall my brother's final season, trying to will himself through it to the spring. Touching poem.
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This poem, Goodbyes, touches me deeply as I recall my brother's final season, trying to will himself through it to the spring. Touching poem.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Oh Bill, thank you for sharing those dear poignant thoughts. Many blessings, Lo
Comment from Robbie Yates
This is sad and poignant - and tugged on my heartstrings a little. I love the line, "beneath a cloak of love." I hope the lady in the poem finds peace.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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This is sad and poignant - and tugged on my heartstrings a little. I love the line, "beneath a cloak of love." I hope the lady in the poem finds peace.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Hi Robbie, I hope she finds peace, too. Thank you so much for your comments and insight.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A skilful poem and I could identify with your words, many words remained unsaid between my husband and I, they were much too painful to say, a delicate and emotion poem, love Dolly x
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A skilful poem and I could identify with your words, many words remained unsaid between my husband and I, they were much too painful to say, a delicate and emotion poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Dear Dolly, I am so sorry that you experienced this kind of pain. Thank you for such kind words.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Goodbyes", is a well-written and heart-wrenching piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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"Goodbyes", is a well-written and heart-wrenching piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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What joy you gave me to read your comments! Thank you very much!
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LoannaLois, you're more than welcome.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from kahpot
What an exceptionally moving work this is I will read this many more times (too late I have already) what a talented Author you are, a very emotional read, I hope to read more of this Author****kahpot
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What an exceptionally moving work this is I will read this many more times (too late I have already) what a talented Author you are, a very emotional read, I hope to read more of this Author****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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😃thanks again
Comment from Lady Jane
I have to give this six stars. It is an exceptional piece. I loved the lines, "Yes, for one more spring; one last time, for remembering." Just breathtaking how you capture so much feeling in so few lines. Obviously I find no room for improvement. Imagery is great. Emotion is raw and deep. Picture you choice was spot on. An overall excellent piece. Thanks for sharing.
Janelle
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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I have to give this six stars. It is an exceptional piece. I loved the lines, "Yes, for one more spring; one last time, for remembering." Just breathtaking how you capture so much feeling in so few lines. Obviously I find no room for improvement. Imagery is great. Emotion is raw and deep. Picture you choice was spot on. An overall excellent piece. Thanks for sharing.
Janelle
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Thank you so very much for such nice comments. The six bright stars are a beautiful gift! Thank you. Blessings, Lo
Comment from kiwijenny
Loanna this reminds me of my mother and father. They were married beside a small sapling tree . She is now gone and I can see that tree being a painful reminder
For once
the tree she shared with him,
beneath a cloak of love.
But now the tree...and he
speak only from above.
This is poignant and very sad.
I wish I had a six
God bless
Jenny
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Loanna this reminds me of my mother and father. They were married beside a small sapling tree . She is now gone and I can see that tree being a painful reminder
For once
the tree she shared with him,
beneath a cloak of love.
But now the tree...and he
speak only from above.
This is poignant and very sad.
I wish I had a six
God bless
Jenny
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Oh sweet Jenny,
Blessings to you and lovely memories. Thank you so much.Lo
Comment from friartuck
Trees are special - I can't cut one around my place without remembering my dad, and thanking him for it. He's gone now, but the legacy he left will remain for years to come. Your fine poem reminded me of that, and I truly thank you for sharing it here.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Trees are special - I can't cut one around my place without remembering my dad, and thanking him for it. He's gone now, but the legacy he left will remain for years to come. Your fine poem reminded me of that, and I truly thank you for sharing it here.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Oh Friar, you made my day...I read my feelings in your words...Thank you! Blessings, Lo
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Very poignant and hauntingly beautiful. I love the sentiment you convey. I understand goodbyes/grief and you've written the emotions into your words, very well.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Very poignant and hauntingly beautiful. I love the sentiment you convey. I understand goodbyes/grief and you've written the emotions into your words, very well.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Dear Cindy, It is still a good world when we can share with each other and be understood. Blessings, lo
