Goodbyes
She has one more goodbye32 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like your choice of artwork, Loanna.
-Your note is appreciated, and you
have written a good poem about it.
-The imagery creates a word picture
of this woman and her feelings.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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-I like your choice of artwork, Loanna.
-Your note is appreciated, and you
have written a good poem about it.
-The imagery creates a word picture
of this woman and her feelings.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you so very very much!
Your comm
ents are
Appreciated🌷
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You are very welcome.
Comment from donette1914
very touching and sad poem of goodbyes. very heart felt because this touch my heart
thank you for sharing this well penned work donette1914 july 15 2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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very touching and sad poem of goodbyes. very heart felt because this touch my heart
thank you for sharing this well penned work donette1914 july 15 2018
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Hi Donette,
Thank you for the kind comments!!!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Loannalois, Oh this is such a sad poem. It tells of the tree that is dying 'Yes, for one more spring;' The last stanza has a finality about it - both the tree and the loved one 'speak' only from above. Both gone and she is alone. Your author notes elaborate on the words in the poem - giving the whole a convincing truth. Lovely poem. Warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Hi Loannalois, Oh this is such a sad poem. It tells of the tree that is dying 'Yes, for one more spring;' The last stanza has a finality about it - both the tree and the loved one 'speak' only from above. Both gone and she is alone. Your author notes elaborate on the words in the poem - giving the whole a convincing truth. Lovely poem. Warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much, Dorothy. I always love your comments and your insight. Blessings, Lo
Comment from papa55mike
This is wonderfully written and the picture is perfect. I can feel the pain of loss in every word, still trying to find spring again and be reborn. At the first of the year, I thought I was saying goodbye, but God gave her back to me. I was lucky. I wish I had six left.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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This is wonderfully written and the picture is perfect. I can feel the pain of loss in every word, still trying to find spring again and be reborn. At the first of the year, I thought I was saying goodbye, but God gave her back to me. I was lucky. I wish I had six left.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Papa, blessings on you and your wife...You responded in a way that showed your first-hand knowledge. Thank you for your comments. Thank you for your kind words...
Comment from Donka Kristeva
"Goodbyes" bring a flow of emotions or words but those don't take away the sadness. This poem speaks of memory that seems to always stay where it should be. And of a voice from above that transcends human feelings.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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"Goodbyes" bring a flow of emotions or words but those don't take away the sadness. This poem speaks of memory that seems to always stay where it should be. And of a voice from above that transcends human feelings.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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I thank you again my friend
Your words were greatfully appreciated
Comment from victor 66
Life can be a bummer and often is. People will tell you, "you'll get over it" but you never really do. I'm pretty old and there are places and things that bring back memories that are both happy and sad. I try to go with the happy but it doesn't always work. I just hope there are more days with the former rather than the latter. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Life can be a bummer and often is. People will tell you, "you'll get over it" but you never really do. I'm pretty old and there are places and things that bring back memories that are both happy and sad. I try to go with the happy but it doesn't always work. I just hope there are more days with the former rather than the latter. Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Dear Victor, your words were poignant and kind. Thank you.
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You are welcome.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully expressed and deeply poignant and sad writing of this fine example of "feelings on paper". Yes, it's hard not to walk or go where one once walked with a departed dear one, I wonderf doing something different is the answer, it's a tough one. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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A beautifully expressed and deeply poignant and sad writing of this fine example of "feelings on paper". Yes, it's hard not to walk or go where one once walked with a departed dear one, I wonderf doing something different is the answer, it's a tough one. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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It was wonderful hearing from you. Thank you for the kind and insightful words
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Good job Loanna
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
So sad, so romantic, so beautiful! This is saturated and infused with great feelings and emotions. I like the feel of this and how well you've brought forth this love letter in a poem. I enjoyed reading this Loannalois! Well done!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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So sad, so romantic, so beautiful! This is saturated and infused with great feelings and emotions. I like the feel of this and how well you've brought forth this love letter in a poem. I enjoyed reading this Loannalois! Well done!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Hello Jeffrey,
Thank you so much for your comments. They meant a great deal. Blessings, Lo
Comment from Gloria ....
I very much enjoy your free verse poem about saying goodbye. So true that if the memories are too vivid one must shuffle them off into somewhere for future reference.
a love work of art and many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
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I very much enjoy your free verse poem about saying goodbye. So true that if the memories are too vivid one must shuffle them off into somewhere for future reference.
a love work of art and many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a sad poem well written. It creates great imagery in short lines. The color scheme & picture work well with you poignant words. The woman & the tree seem connected in a way that many would not understand. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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This is a sad poem well written. It creates great imagery in short lines. The color scheme & picture work well with you poignant words. The woman & the tree seem connected in a way that many would not understand. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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But You did... and you blessed me with your comments. Love, Lo
