Remember Me?
Soulmates follow each other through time.19 total reviews
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent rhyming poetry contest entry. The poet writes of a love through a thousand ages. In death they will part, but not for long. Their love rekindles at their rebirth. And they know it's each other by the first song that was sung. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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This is an excellent rhyming poetry contest entry. The poet writes of a love through a thousand ages. In death they will part, but not for long. Their love rekindles at their rebirth. And they know it's each other by the first song that was sung. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I always appreciate it.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Some memories are tied to a song and last a thousand years. This is a very good poem. I'm sure it will do very well in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Some memories are tied to a song and last a thousand years. This is a very good poem. I'm sure it will do very well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you for such a great review..I really do believe in reincarnation.
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
This piece was well written and well worded, it had many good lines and flowed together smoothly, the color scheme added a certain vibrancy to the writing , good work and thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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This piece was well written and well worded, it had many good lines and flowed together smoothly, the color scheme added a certain vibrancy to the writing , good work and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my work, it's much appreciated.
Comment from Joan E.
What a spectacular artwork and use of color for your presentation! I enjoyed your rhymes and circularity with the repeated stanza. I was intrigued by following the "soulmates" through time. Big cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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What a spectacular artwork and use of color for your presentation! I enjoyed your rhymes and circularity with the repeated stanza. I was intrigued by following the "soulmates" through time. Big cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this excellent review, it made my day.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Boogienights. This is a good entry for the contest. Very nice rhythm and rhyme. This is a beautifully
Written poem. I think it is possible to have a soulmate in multiple lifetimes I really like this part
"Still both of us understand,
that when this life is through,
It won't be long until you're with me
and I am back with you.
A subtle glance, a random touch,
will happen one fine day
and then two soulmates pulled together,
will soon be on their way"
Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hi Boogienights. This is a good entry for the contest. Very nice rhythm and rhyme. This is a beautifully
Written poem. I think it is possible to have a soulmate in multiple lifetimes I really like this part
"Still both of us understand,
that when this life is through,
It won't be long until you're with me
and I am back with you.
A subtle glance, a random touch,
will happen one fine day
and then two soulmates pulled together,
will soon be on their way"
Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it's always appreciated.
Comment from Van
Wonderful saga of inseparable souls. I might suggest dropping the apostrophe from your's, I don't know it's necessary since 'yours' is possessive in nature. And "life was more then good" should probably be 'more than good'. Great submission for the rhyming poetry contest.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Wonderful saga of inseparable souls. I might suggest dropping the apostrophe from your's, I don't know it's necessary since 'yours' is possessive in nature. And "life was more then good" should probably be 'more than good'. Great submission for the rhyming poetry contest.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for this great review, and for pointing out my errors. I've already corrected them and I can't thank you enough for your help.
Comment from D. K. Mamula
I love this, especially the first and last stanzas. This poem reminds me of the movie What Dreams May Come starring Robin WIlliams. It is devastatingly sad, but the ending is worth it.
I love the idea that we can live a life together and then come back and find each other again. There are many people in my life that I feel I have known before and I am sure I will see again. Beautifully done! Thanks so much for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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I love this, especially the first and last stanzas. This poem reminds me of the movie What Dreams May Come starring Robin WIlliams. It is devastatingly sad, but the ending is worth it.
I love the idea that we can live a life together and then come back and find each other again. There are many people in my life that I feel I have known before and I am sure I will see again. Beautifully done! Thanks so much for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much. I saw that movie and loved it, I've always had an interest in reincarnation ever since reading.. Edgar Cayce on reincarnation, when I was 12 years old. Thanks again.
Comment from Lady Jane
The rhyme here was spot on and the tale very touching. I loved your refrain, "sing to me the song you sang a thousand years ago." It worked well and didnt't seem out of place. I have no suggestions for revision or edit. Interesting how you were able to tie a love story into a reincarnate scenario so flawlessly. I enjoyed this read. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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The rhyme here was spot on and the tale very touching. I loved your refrain, "sing to me the song you sang a thousand years ago." It worked well and didnt't seem out of place. I have no suggestions for revision or edit. Interesting how you were able to tie a love story into a reincarnate scenario so flawlessly. I enjoyed this read. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful review and your kind words, I really appreciate them.
Comment from kiwijenny
Sing to me the song you sang a thousand years ago.
I still remember every note and lyric even though,
a hundred lives have passed between us.
We're soulmates, this I know.
Sing to me the song you sang a thousand years ago.
This could be my poem for my hubby
God bless
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Sing to me the song you sang a thousand years ago.
I still remember every note and lyric even though,
a hundred lives have passed between us.
We're soulmates, this I know.
Sing to me the song you sang a thousand years ago.
This could be my poem for my hubby
God bless
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful review and the six stars..it made my night. :)
