Eye Candy
Good looks nourish the imagination.5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-6-2, Eye Candy, uses the ten syllables to compliment me and, apparently, this dude here. I wife says I'm so pretty I'm fattening. (or did she say I was fattening; or just getting fat?)
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
This 2-6-2, Eye Candy, uses the ten syllables to compliment me and, apparently, this dude here. I wife says I'm so pretty I'm fattening. (or did she say I was fattening; or just getting fat?)
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Your read is appreciated and your comments made me smile. This is a rare commodity right now, I tank you for this delight in remembering there are things to snile about.
Have a great weekend.
Brigitte
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right, Mystery Author. Your poem is in good form with the correct number of syllables. As Elvis would say. "A hunk of burning love." But those first impressions do make one stop & think if there is more than meets the eye. Good job & best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
You are right, Mystery Author. Your poem is in good form with the correct number of syllables. As Elvis would say. "A hunk of burning love." But those first impressions do make one stop & think if there is more than meets the eye. Good job & best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this praise for "Eye Candy". It was fun to write. Congratulations on your win in this competition.
Have a great weekend.
Brigitte
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL. I agree. I met a guy yesterday (not romantic) but he was eye candy. Just a treat for the eyes. Women enjoy a good looker, too. Well written and fun. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
LOL. I agree. I met a guy yesterday (not romantic) but he was eye candy. Just a treat for the eyes. Women enjoy a good looker, too. Well written and fun. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Thank you for reading and LOOKING.
This was fun to write for I have never tried this form before. My husband says it's an old woman's dream.
Have a great day!
Brigitte
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Got my vote. LOL!
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a fun topic to address. Human nature to be appealed through our sense of sight. Your 2-6-2 is well formatted and it's a great entry for the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
What a fun topic to address. Human nature to be appealed through our sense of sight. Your 2-6-2 is well formatted and it's a great entry for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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This was one. Of, my my husband didn't think so,lol. Thanks for reading and your kind comments. I have never posted a 2-6-2 before.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 2-6-2 poem and entry for the contest
First impression are great, but second, third and more
are more telling and likely to be accurate
Excellent picture to match your words
Well done
pass the candy
RS
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
This is an excellent 2-6-2 poem and entry for the contest
First impression are great, but second, third and more
are more telling and likely to be accurate
Excellent picture to match your words
Well done
pass the candy
RS
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Thanks for the read and comments. Oh, I'll share for sure....my husband would want me to shred the picture,lol. He'd say, "An old woman's fantasy."
Blessings,
Brigitte