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Sleepyhead

Gotta have a nap.

9 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-6-2, Sleepyhead, uses the ten syllables to capture that 'end of the trail' moment when the forward progress meets a soft couch. Precious shot of worn out tyke.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
    Thank you. I thought he was adorable too.
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Author,

I've been perusing the entries in this contest, and mostly skipping through without reviewing - but I had to stop and say something here. Just:

HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!

I love it! Much good luck to you!

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
    Thanks Robyn. Glad you liked it and that it,made you smile. I loved the toddler too!
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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This is such a great photo and I can visually see why it warrants a poem. :) What a sweet little 2-6-2 that tells quite a story. Good luck in this contest. This is a good entry!

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
    Thanks so much!
Comment from donette1914
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This is so funny! a lot of adults can relate after a hard day at work. very well written and i hope for the best in the contest. It was a pleasure to read your well penned work donette1914 July 2018

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
    Thanks so much!
Comment from meeshu
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that looks like me whenever I have Golf on. naps are the 9th wonder of the world they are the closest mortals can get to Nirvana.. good luck..

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
    Thank you.
Comment from RodG
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Perfect pairing of picture and poem. Young children seem to have endless energy, but when it does run out they can nap in any position. A fun snap-shot of childhood wonders.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
    Thank you!
Comment from LaFrance
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Your 2-6-2 poem is a wonderful entry to the contest. It really goes well with the photograph. I enjoyed your simplicity of the poem. It's amazing how so little can say so much.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
    Thank you. I really appreciate your thoughts and review.
Comment from Ange.Kay
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haha very innovative. Looking forward to reading more from you. Sometimes writers like to complicate everything, make it difficult to decipher. This is short and simple and fits perfectly within the syllable requirement. Cheers

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
    Thanks so much. I am glad it made you smile!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Haha, but cute, Mystery Author. Good job on your contest entry. Your syllable count is correct. The picture + your words make a fun 262. Best wishes. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
    I appreciate your review. Thank you.