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Comment from
Pamusart
Hi Ricky. I will not ask you any more about Jason. My poor brother had six sisters and no brothers until the last two kids came along. Both boys. Girls tend to be caretakers more so than boys. I did notice one glitch I think. Thank you for sharing
""She was always there with my from age two to three!" ". Did you mean "with me"?
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
Thanks Pam
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Comment from
Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about new life and gives an account of daughters and sons and about their growth and establishment, the ultimate gift, family and whereabouts; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
Thanks again Alcreator for your Review!
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Comment from
Gloria ....
Dr Ricky what a most cool poem in celebration of your new family. They can't help but enjoy this upbeat and heartfelt dedication to the joy of them.
terrific job with a terrific poem.
one little typo My thoughts on the Ulimate (Ultimate) Gift.
Good writing here.
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
Thanks Gloria and Part Number Two was just added.
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