A Libtard's Dream
This is the Supreme Court you mean, right?12 total reviews
Comment from RFL
Just love this satirical take on the Supreme Court appointment. So clever and adhering to the poetic rhythm as well as the song, which by the way is one of my favorites. Thank you for making me smile today. Best, RFL
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Just love this satirical take on the Supreme Court appointment. So clever and adhering to the poetic rhythm as well as the song, which by the way is one of my favorites. Thank you for making me smile today. Best, RFL
Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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THANK YOU! I was beginning to think no one would get this. You're my new hero. Yes, great song! Agree. mike
Comment from Bill Schott
This three-five-three, Libtard's Dream, uses the eleven syllables to make conservatives feel good about moving the country forty years into the past.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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This three-five-three, Libtard's Dream, uses the eleven syllables to make conservatives feel good about moving the country forty years into the past.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Yep, or more. The liberals STILL have the Supremes though ... STOP, in the name of love! LOL
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Your short verse brings back memories of the music so long ago.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Your short verse brings back memories of the music so long ago.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Thank you Sharon. :))
Comment from Gloria ....
Very clever, author. Court, love, the Supremes--Brilliant. I truly admire the amount of creative thinking that goes into these shorter pieces and you've done a fine job with this beauty.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Very clever, author. Court, love, the Supremes--Brilliant. I truly admire the amount of creative thinking that goes into these shorter pieces and you've done a fine job with this beauty.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Wow. Thanks so much, Gloria. I was beginning to think NO ONE was going to get the gist of this. Yes, you are on point and I am relieved. I'll take this as my win. :))
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hi, this is different. I actually don't understand it, but I like the picture although I am not sure of its connection to the poem. Is 'Supreme's Court' a town, or a courthouse? Anyway, the poem doesn't require my understanding to be a good poem and there are no spelling errors etc, so thanks for sharing your writing, and my only explanation for improvement would be to add an author note to let readers know where it is an what it means. Cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Hi, this is different. I actually don't understand it, but I like the picture although I am not sure of its connection to the poem. Is 'Supreme's Court' a town, or a courthouse? Anyway, the poem doesn't require my understanding to be a good poem and there are no spelling errors etc, so thanks for sharing your writing, and my only explanation for improvement would be to add an author note to let readers know where it is an what it means. Cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Hi there, Ana. I forget that there's a whole world besides the U.S.A. LOL! Typical, yes? We're currently in the middle of filling a spot on our Supreme Court here. Well, with a conservative President comes a conservative Justice. So this is a poor liberal hoping beyond hope that all this Supreme Court talk is actually about the beloved Surpemes and not our judicial body.
I'm pleased you enjoy the Supremes as much as I do and that's enough to get a favorable response. Thanks so much. :))
Comment from phill doran
Hello anon
Great stuff - I hope enough reviewers are old enough (and cultured enough!) to recall Motown's finest.
A good one: contest fit in that it is the right shape and size and perhaps different enough to stand out in the contest too.
I wish you well with this and your further writing
cheers
phill.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Hello anon
Great stuff - I hope enough reviewers are old enough (and cultured enough!) to recall Motown's finest.
A good one: contest fit in that it is the right shape and size and perhaps different enough to stand out in the contest too.
I wish you well with this and your further writing
cheers
phill.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Gee, does one have to be OLD to remember? Hey ... I saw their picture on grandpa's eight track tape. LOL
Glad you liked this one, Phil. Not everyone knows what in the world I'm talking about, so I appreciate this review a great deal. Thanks so much. :))
Comment from Miranda Langston
this is certainly a creative poem. I'm just not sure what it's about really. i mean, it's about supreme court, obviously, but i still don't entirely get it.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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this is certainly a creative poem. I'm just not sure what it's about really. i mean, it's about supreme court, obviously, but i still don't entirely get it.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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It's about a liberal hoping beyond hope that all this Supreme Court talk is about the Supremes girl group instead being as though there is certain to be a conservative Justice added to the bench. You're on the right track. You're not alone, some get it, some don't. Thanks for a close read and honest comments. That helps a lot. :))
Comment from meeshu
that's great, really great. libtards------classic. I'm sure you have heard the country is going thru a heatwave right now, a lot of people without power.
they're called: Democrats. pa-domp-pa-pa..
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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that's great, really great. libtards------classic. I'm sure you have heard the country is going thru a heatwave right now, a lot of people without power.
they're called: Democrats. pa-domp-pa-pa..
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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HAAAAAAAAAHAHAHA! You could make a pretty good entry out of that!! LOL
Yep. The Dems aren't in the best of shape and they're going to be looking at this conservative court for decades. No wonder they're dreaming that this Supreme Court talk is about the Supremes, the girl group. :))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! I so adored the Supremes and whenever I hear that music today it still has the same magic for me, I just want to get up and dance and your poem made me want to hear that song again, The Supremes were the best ever, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Wow! I so adored the Supremes and whenever I hear that music today it still has the same magic for me, I just want to get up and dance and your poem made me want to hear that song again, The Supremes were the best ever, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Yep. They were awesome back in the day, and Diana Ross is still going strong. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much. :))
Comment from victor 66
This is a very nice play on words. Cute, catchy and current. The three very attractive ladies do not hurt either. Best wishes and good luck in the three - five - three writing contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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This is a very nice play on words. Cute, catchy and current. The three very attractive ladies do not hurt either. Best wishes and good luck in the three - five - three writing contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Nope, they never hurt. LOL Thanks so much. :))
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You are most welcome.
