Dry Leaves
Poem 3-5-33 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This three-five-three, Dry Leaves, uses the eleven syllables to capture that seasonal movement, via gravity and aging stems, of leafy matter from limb to landing. Nice.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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This three-five-three, Dry Leaves, uses the eleven syllables to capture that seasonal movement, via gravity and aging stems, of leafy matter from limb to landing. Nice.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Thomas Bowling
What's the hurry? I love Autumn as much as the next guy, but there is no need to rush it. As I get older, I don't need time to fly by. I need it to slow down.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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What's the hurry? I love Autumn as much as the next guy, but there is no need to rush it. As I get older, I don't need time to fly by. I need it to slow down.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Thanks for engaging with this little poem -much appreciated zanya
Comment from rspoet
This is a very fine 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
with excellent imagery of the fall season
and the swirling leaves
Excellent picture to match
Best wishes in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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This is a very fine 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
with excellent imagery of the fall season
and the swirling leaves
Excellent picture to match
Best wishes in the contest
RS
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018
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Great review -thanks for reading zanya
