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When I Was Ten

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32 total reviews 
Comment from Old Soldier
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Nice write. Nothing stays the same. If it did we would never grow. Don't get "about on it"? Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading and reviewing.

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Old Soldier, for the nice review, Joan
Comment from SarahPenn1
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Did you mean 'about ONE it' instead of 'on' ?
Accurate description of how easy life was, before having to pay bloody bills
Our innocence and naivety is now so missed

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
    Yes, I will make the change. Thanks for the review.

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