Reviews from

A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities

Viewing comments for Chapter 191 "Lawrence"
A collection of poems showcasing unusual words

11 total reviews 
Comment from Robbie Yates
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Great poem, Lawrence.. I mean, Craig. I like your use of rhyme, and the phrase "the landscape sears." Makes me think of a delicious steak - although I'm sure that wasn't your desired intention. :)

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
    Making people think of steak is never my intention, Robbie - as you'll discover if you can hang in long enough to read a few more of my poems LOL Most grateful - Craig
reply by Robbie Yates on 10-Jul-2018
    I secretly hope that now, you write a poem about steak, just to make me second-guess my interpretation! Bahahaha