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Haiku and Senryu Suites

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Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites

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Comment from irishauthorme
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hey, this verse explores and confirms one of my beliefs, that of regeneration of the soul although I am at a loss to understand or confirm how it all works. I know that this is an important part of our understanding the formation of life and the ultimate reason for us being here.
I do believe that we were with God at one point and have either elected(Important!) to live a mortal lifetime here on earth, or have been sent as part of a family.
Great addition to your Suite, should bring numerous comments from thoise you forced to think "outside the bun."
irish

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
    Hey Irish, thanks for your warm comments and great review. Yes there's so much more out there to understand, and I believe that we will gain some understanding when we leave this body but that remains a mystery.
    Thanks again I really appreciate your comments and input.

    Blessings,

    Darren
Comment from Bucketlist
Excellent
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Carpe Diem for sure! I agree with the sentiment - most of our mental time is from thoughts of yesterdays and tomorrows, in fact I think that's how anxiety is perpetuated. I feel your poetry is very closely tied to your music by way of emphasis on words which would be a strum stress of your guitar. Forgive me if I'm incorrect!
Hugs, Trisha

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
    Hey Tricia, no need for apologies as many of the greatest discoveries were discovered by accidents.
    I really appreciate your friendship and comments here, I can see that we were both on a road to enlightenment and as I read interview your work we seem to be on Parallel paths.
    Great to hear from you, thanks for the great review keep writing.

    Blessings,

    Darren
reply by Bucketlist on 11-Jul-2018
    Yes it?s good to have people who think in similar ways, Enjoy your day.
Comment from Rose King1
Good
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It is beautiful, it is true, the ability to soar without the burden of confinement whether internal or external is truly an accomplishment.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
    Thanks
Comment from Artasylum
Excellent
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I like that you have freedom attached to ambitions... Beautiful fun read with many questions posed... I say yes to all and I say yes to taking responsibility for my freedom. yours, diana

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
    Thanks for you're fine, it's always a pleasure to interact with people here friends old and new.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger