Haiku and Senryu Suites
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Where Have You Been? "Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites
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Comment from irishauthorme
Hey, this verse explores and confirms one of my beliefs, that of regeneration of the soul although I am at a loss to understand or confirm how it all works. I know that this is an important part of our understanding the formation of life and the ultimate reason for us being here.
I do believe that we were with God at one point and have either elected(Important!) to live a mortal lifetime here on earth, or have been sent as part of a family.
Great addition to your Suite, should bring numerous comments from thoise you forced to think "outside the bun."
irish
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
Hey, this verse explores and confirms one of my beliefs, that of regeneration of the soul although I am at a loss to understand or confirm how it all works. I know that this is an important part of our understanding the formation of life and the ultimate reason for us being here.
I do believe that we were with God at one point and have either elected(Important!) to live a mortal lifetime here on earth, or have been sent as part of a family.
Great addition to your Suite, should bring numerous comments from thoise you forced to think "outside the bun."
irish
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Hey Irish, thanks for your warm comments and great review. Yes there's so much more out there to understand, and I believe that we will gain some understanding when we leave this body but that remains a mystery.
Thanks again I really appreciate your comments and input.
Blessings,
Darren
Comment from Bucketlist
Carpe Diem for sure! I agree with the sentiment - most of our mental time is from thoughts of yesterdays and tomorrows, in fact I think that's how anxiety is perpetuated. I feel your poetry is very closely tied to your music by way of emphasis on words which would be a strum stress of your guitar. Forgive me if I'm incorrect!
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
Carpe Diem for sure! I agree with the sentiment - most of our mental time is from thoughts of yesterdays and tomorrows, in fact I think that's how anxiety is perpetuated. I feel your poetry is very closely tied to your music by way of emphasis on words which would be a strum stress of your guitar. Forgive me if I'm incorrect!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Hey Tricia, no need for apologies as many of the greatest discoveries were discovered by accidents.
I really appreciate your friendship and comments here, I can see that we were both on a road to enlightenment and as I read interview your work we seem to be on Parallel paths.
Great to hear from you, thanks for the great review keep writing.
Blessings,
Darren
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Yes it?s good to have people who think in similar ways, Enjoy your day.
Comment from Rose King1
It is beautiful, it is true, the ability to soar without the burden of confinement whether internal or external is truly an accomplishment.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
It is beautiful, it is true, the ability to soar without the burden of confinement whether internal or external is truly an accomplishment.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thanks
Comment from Artasylum
I like that you have freedom attached to ambitions... Beautiful fun read with many questions posed... I say yes to all and I say yes to taking responsibility for my freedom. yours, diana
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
I like that you have freedom attached to ambitions... Beautiful fun read with many questions posed... I say yes to all and I say yes to taking responsibility for my freedom. yours, diana
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Thanks for you're fine, it's always a pleasure to interact with people here friends old and new.
Blessings,
Brother Badger