Comment from royowen

Excellent

It looks like a quatern poem Christine, beautifully manicured and written so well, the meter is perfect, the tetrametric quatrains work so very well, it looks so smooth and scribed with ease of word choice and timing in abab rhyming, well done, good job, blessjngs, Roy

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018

Hi Roy, Thank you for your kind words you always give me lovely feedback and I enjoy hearing from you Keep warm Cheers Christine

reply by royowen on 09-Jul-2018

Bless you Christine.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Mind??! I'm thrilled! And I really like this one, too! Isn't it fun how we all came at the 'cloud' concept from different angles? This is so much fun - wish more people would participate! We could make a 'cloud' book! hahaha

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018

Hi Robyn, Thanks my friend and yes It is fun to bounce of each other and what a good suggestion a cloud book would be interesting. See you up there Ha Ha Cheers Christine.
My Pantomime starts today I am an 'ugly sister' in Cinderella and have 8 shows to do over our school holidays I will do a poem or two about it when it is finished. ha Ha I am having a ball the cast is such fun Cheers Christine

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to use with your poem
It is a perfect match,
I like the movement of your words just like a cloud, slowly and gentle are your words.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018

Hi Cookie, Thank you and the clouds are always interesting to watch and I enjoyed writong one to match Gloria and Robyn Cheers Christine

reply by misscookie on 09-Jul-2018

Your very welcome enjoyed your cloud very much
Cookie

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Nicely done spreading the repeating line through the poem and making each stanza work around it. Flow is great the rhyme is perfect . Very imaginative

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018

Hi Barb, Thanks so much It was fun to write and made me think about the repeating line Glad you liked it Cheers Christone

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Chrissy, a lovely poem written in Pantoum form. It reads well with good meter and the repetition of the repeating, descending lines fit in each stanza well and do not sound contrived. A good poem - joining in the fun of a sort of Round Robin activity. I enjoyed the read. Warm regards Dorothy xx

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018

Hi Dorothy, Thanks for reading and yes it was fun to join in the cloud theme So glad to have you comments as always Many Cheers to you Christine xx

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A lovely flow here Christine like a cloud floating by, great rhyming words with the mystery of clouds remaining in tact, an enjoyable read, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2018

Thank you very much Dolly. now I'm off to bed Cheers Christine x