Inside the cloud
For Gloria and Robyn16 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
There are peopl who always have their heads in the clouds LOL I guess that's creativity or ADD LOL. You bring imagination and humour to your penning, thank you. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing
Hugs,Trisha
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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There are peopl who always have their heads in the clouds LOL I guess that's creativity or ADD LOL. You bring imagination and humour to your penning, thank you. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing
Hugs,Trisha
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Hi Trisha Thank you for your review. and the clouds are always changing so who knows what goes on LOL I enjoy a challenge and have fun with my writing Cheers Christine xx
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You are welcome
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Wow! So pretty. I love the rhyming pattern throughout your whole poem. The style of the poem is intriguing with the questions you have asked in the poem. Who knows what happens in a cloud? :)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Wow! So pretty. I love the rhyming pattern throughout your whole poem. The style of the poem is intriguing with the questions you have asked in the poem. Who knows what happens in a cloud? :)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Hi Cindy Thank you and it was fun to keep the line going through so one needed to make sense of the stanza Inspired by Gloria and Robyn Cheers for your review Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. This is a very enjoyable poem featuring Robyn and Gloria, described and illustrated well. Rhyming is super. Nice job in this fine contribution to the multi-authored book. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Hi Christine. This is a very enjoyable poem featuring Robyn and Gloria, described and illustrated well. Rhyming is super. Nice job in this fine contribution to the multi-authored book. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Hi Marilyn! Thanks for your review And couldn't resist the challenge of doing a cloud poem ! busy with the Pantomime this week have had great feedback I make a good ugle sister LOL Cheers Christine Ps Poem pending Ha Ha
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Is the Cinderella/ugly sister pantomime over with now OR is it this weekend? Marilyn
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2 shows to go we have done 6 kids shows all very well received and we have 2 adult shows this weekend Chris
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent work. Clouds are one of my all time favorite natural phenomenons. I have spent many an hour just watching them. Clouds are the earth's thoughts. Nice pacing and rhyming. Hugh
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Excellent work. Clouds are one of my all time favorite natural phenomenons. I have spent many an hour just watching them. Clouds are the earth's thoughts. Nice pacing and rhyming. Hugh
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Hi Hugh, Thank you for your review andyes one can wile away many hours watching the clouds they make fascinating shapes .I am glad you enjoyed my poem Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun quatern poem. It is a mystery what is going on inside a cloud that seems to disappears at one place and appears at another place what happens in the meantime with what is inside the cloud.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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A very well-written fun quatern poem. It is a mystery what is going on inside a cloud that seems to disappears at one place and appears at another place what happens in the meantime with what is inside the cloud.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Sandra, Thanks for reading inspired by Gloria and Robyns cloud poem. I wonder sometimes the clouds are really interesting in formation Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
This was enjoyable to read Christine. I enjoyed the rhyme pattern, the whole thing was easy and comfortable to read. Clouds are interesting things for sure, especially when they cover the mountain tops. I liked the questions you raised in the poem, because one just never knows. Well done, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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This was enjoyable to read Christine. I enjoyed the rhyme pattern, the whole thing was easy and comfortable to read. Clouds are interesting things for sure, especially when they cover the mountain tops. I liked the questions you raised in the poem, because one just never knows. Well done, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Ary, Thanks for your review ?This poem was inspired by Gloria and Robyn who wrote cloud poems and asked the question What happens in a cloud Yes they are lovely over the mountains and when flying thrugh them also , have a great day Cheers Christine
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You are most welcome Christine.
Comment from lyenochka
A very nice quatern poem, Christine. I like how you present the cloud world as another dimension full of mystery and possibilities. Maybe someday we will all know what it contains.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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A very nice quatern poem, Christine. I like how you present the cloud world as another dimension full of mystery and possibilities. Maybe someday we will all know what it contains.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Helen, Thanks and yes they are mysterious and beautiful many times to watch. I thought I would add to Gloria amd Robyns cloud poems. I enjoy the challenge of doing one also Cheers Christine
Comment from Bill Schott
This quatern, Inside the Cloud, follows the designated format and takes us on a float-about to discover something about those seemingly innocuous billows of frozen air. Hope we find something out.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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This quatern, Inside the Cloud, follows the designated format and takes us on a float-about to discover something about those seemingly innocuous billows of frozen air. Hope we find something out.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Bill, Thank you and maybe one day we will find out. Some cloud formations are fascinating to watch. Just another one to addto Gloria and Robyns poems Cheers Christine
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
the premise of the clouds being a mystery was right on point, do you know that no one knows how lightning is made, but it only happens when clouds are out, amazing read
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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the premise of the clouds being a mystery was right on point, do you know that no one knows how lightning is made, but it only happens when clouds are out, amazing read
Comment Written 08-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Phillip, Thank you and yes the clouds are interesting at times really fun to watch them changing shape And gorgeous in sunsets. Many Cheers for your review Christine
Comment from Tootsie
Congratulations, this shows great imagination, but still says it all in plain language so it is easy to understand. I have to admit I am not very good at some poems they don't seem to make much sense.
However, I do enjoy poems like this one. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Congratulations, this shows great imagination, but still says it all in plain language so it is easy to understand. I have to admit I am not very good at some poems they don't seem to make much sense.
However, I do enjoy poems like this one. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 08-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Tootsie, Thank so much for reading my cloud poem and I am pleased you enjoyed reading this one it was a fun write and inspired by Gloria and Robyn . Cheers For your review Christine
