Nice new hat.
How selfish of her to jilt him after I've bought my hat19 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about acancelled wedding after a new hat is bought, now the hat may never be worn. A very good choice of artwork and an interesting topic.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about acancelled wedding after a new hat is bought, now the hat may never be worn. A very good choice of artwork and an interesting topic.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, educational, image is very artistic, perfectly fitted hat, suited
and brings out the features...making the young lady stand out, as the hype
of fashion, as Fashion Designer this is a very interesting display of fashion,
this post has a lot of meaning, although a special day is cancelled beauty
remains in place, inspirational.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Good read, educational, image is very artistic, perfectly fitted hat, suited
and brings out the features...making the young lady stand out, as the hype
of fashion, as Fashion Designer this is a very interesting display of fashion,
this post has a lot of meaning, although a special day is cancelled beauty
remains in place, inspirational.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Many thanks
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You're welcome!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That was a waste of a perfectly good and stylish hat. It's a shame that it didn't get a chance to get seen, or did it? I guess we'll never know. This is cute and was written well. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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That was a waste of a perfectly good and stylish hat. It's a shame that it didn't get a chance to get seen, or did it? I guess we'll never know. This is cute and was written well. Well done!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for the great review
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hopefully you'll still be able to get some mileage outta that new hat, Anonymous Poet.
So sorry to hear about the wedding.
On second thought, since it was YOU who jilted HIM, perhaps HE'S the one I should be offering my condolences to.
Best of luck to you in the 2-4-2 contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Hopefully you'll still be able to get some mileage outta that new hat, Anonymous Poet.
So sorry to hear about the wedding.
On second thought, since it was YOU who jilted HIM, perhaps HE'S the one I should be offering my condolences to.
Best of luck to you in the 2-4-2 contest.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Thanks Dean.
Comment from Artasylum
They make great ornaments for the side of a swivel mirror or you could throw darts and it may make you feel better... You were robbed and even I protest. thanks so much yours, diana
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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They make great ornaments for the side of a swivel mirror or you could throw darts and it may make you feel better... You were robbed and even I protest. thanks so much yours, diana
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018
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Great review Diana. Thanks a lot.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You have wrtitten a very clever poem. In 3 lines you have created a great at least a one hour, melodrama in the reader's imagination. Especially if they are a writer. This poem is great fodder for a mini-series. Picture it. The leading up to the wedding. The buying of the hat, maybe with great doubts. So many doubts about life in general teasing the reader with the slightest of foreshadowing. When I tried to finish this up, I was told I had to write more. So I enjoyed elaborating. This certainly should be enough characters.
Great work.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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You have wrtitten a very clever poem. In 3 lines you have created a great at least a one hour, melodrama in the reader's imagination. Especially if they are a writer. This poem is great fodder for a mini-series. Picture it. The leading up to the wedding. The buying of the hat, maybe with great doubts. So many doubts about life in general teasing the reader with the slightest of foreshadowing. When I tried to finish this up, I was told I had to write more. So I enjoyed elaborating. This certainly should be enough characters.
Great work.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much Liz for your great review and the super six stars. Much appreciated.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine 2-4-2 poem and entry for the contest
Sad poem of the wedding cancelled,
but she should wear the beautiful hat anyway
Excellent art work to match words
Well done
Good luck in the voting
Rs
Note: you posted as a story rather than poem
Tom can fix that.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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This is a fine 2-4-2 poem and entry for the contest
Sad poem of the wedding cancelled,
but she should wear the beautiful hat anyway
Excellent art work to match words
Well done
Good luck in the voting
Rs
Note: you posted as a story rather than poem
Tom can fix that.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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I don't know what you mean. It is a 2-4-2 contest entry. Thanks for the review
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The prompt says to write a 2-4-2 poem, but at the top of your entry, it is listed as general fiction and will only appear on the story side, not the poetry side. It doesn't effect your entry as far as I know, but it won't get the exposure in the poetry listing. Only Tom, Site admin. can change it.
RS
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Thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sad write, left with a beautiful hat and no man to walk out with! Wedding cancelled and the hat is redundant, a fun write and I enjoyed it, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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A sad write, left with a beautiful hat and no man to walk out with! Wedding cancelled and the hat is redundant, a fun write and I enjoyed it, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Pleased you liked it. Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Reading your tag line, I would say maybe you decided the hat would make a better celebration piece for a more promising endeavor!! :) :) Good entry -- good luck!
Thank you for sharing!
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Reading your tag line, I would say maybe you decided the hat would make a better celebration piece for a more promising endeavor!! :) :) Good entry -- good luck!
Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Many thanks.
