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Is this heaven or hell?

7 total reviews 
Comment from Teri7
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I enjoyed this well written rhyming poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind review. Much appreciated: )
Comment from Ulla
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Hi there, what a lovely poem with great rhyming and having a story within. A haunting story about the blind and deaf child who never the less has the ability to communicate with nature. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
    Thank you Ulla for your encouraging review. Your words are greatly appreciated : )
Comment from JudasFm
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Beautifully written, scans wonderfully, and the image adds to the effect. I'm glad you added that little explanation at the bottom; the poem makes more sense. Good luck in the contest and congratulations on a great piece of writing!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
    Thank you sooooo much my friend!! What a lovely, encouraging review with 6 stars too. Very much appreciated : )
Comment from Nanny 6
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I read through your beautiful rhyming poem twice, I always do that when A poem catches my attention :-) you did well to describe sounds of the birds on the ocean maybe near a cliff and kind of a misty morning... I can understand your thoughts in writing this when you met up with a blind girl... And curious as to what she could hear, very good poem my friend ...well written Judy

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
    Thank you so much for your kind review. Much appreciated : )
Comment from Artasylum
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Life's mysteries... this is so poignant... What an amazing story... I would think that language could be a strong point for them. Thanks so much for sharing this child of God's story. Yours, diana

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
    Many thanks for your kind review. Much appreciated : )
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This is a fantastic poem in powerful and lovely rhymes in a free flow of thoughts speaks about a place in isolation with infinite sound with no tranquility or peace to follow; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
    Thank you so much for your kind review, very much appreciated : )
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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Hello, nice to meet you in this lovely verse for the competition, and best of luck, I do think you have a lovely poetic work about this blind girl who couldn't speak, but nevertheless she responds to the birds, and they to her. I only noticed one couplet that doesn't rhyme, I wonder if this might work better for the 'tongue', and 'song' rhyme.

How about:

Her drums vibrate with songs sung

Thanks for sharing your poetry, which waw so poetic and a pleasure to read and reivew, Ana.


 Comment Written 05-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
    Hi, thank you for your thoughtful review. I will certainly look at the piece again and at your suggestion which is much appreciated : )