Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Very nicely done... Nice to see that your found the fire in your sky a Phoenix calling you to write about resurrection in the night. Thanks. yours, dianaxoxo

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thanks, Diana, you are insightful and very kind!

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What a beautiful poem in so few words and yes overcoming adversity is a great triumph lovely artwork and I believe the best 2-4-2 poem I have read, very well done and best wishes****kahpot

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you, Kahpot! You're so very kind with your words.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I think there are times when we have new beginnings and a fresh start can make us feel renewed and refreshed, your poem is uplifting, with a sense of freedom, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Hi, Dolly. Thank you for your uplifting review of my work!

Have a safe 4th of July,

Lynn