Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine 2-4-2 poem and entry for the contest
with a topical subject. We owe much to those early patriots.
Perfect Rockwell painting to match poem
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you for the great review. I love the art too and thought it matched my poem. Happy 4th of July!

Comment from Donka Kristeva

Excellent

The few words in this short poem are powerful, meaningful and yes, right on time. It's rare to see this kind of art work. It was made for this write.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you for your great review and comments. I love the patriotic tone to the art too. Happy 4th of July!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks American freedom fighters fought for the right to live free from fear and achieved Independence and resolved right to live for their generations; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you for a great review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A short but profound and poignant poem and may I wish you happy 4th July celebration, and I wish you luck with tthe contest too, best wishes, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you, Dolly. I appreciate your comments and review.

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Very heroic image you chose... Thanks so much for this very succinct and so much logic in 8 syllables. Bravo and Great, good luck in the contest... kiddo.

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thanks so much!