Comment from Marvin Calloway

Excellent

This is very unusual tale of mayhem for a good cause. It's not your typical assailant. Maybe every neighborhood should have one of these 'Do Gooders.'
Marv

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018

Thank you so much for your kind review. Granny and Jackie are far from the typical serial killer for sure and neither is their weapon. It's a cane gun that delivers how powered ice cubes to the carotid artery.
Thank you again for your great review and congratulations on your win, take care.

reply by Marvin Calloway on 07-Jul-2018

What win?
Must be some mistake.

reply by the author on 07-Jul-2018

Sorry, it was my mistake.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi There, this is another good chapter that has a lot of twists to it. So the police are getting closer, but will they find Granny I wonder. I love the prank they are having on poor Joe. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

Thank you so much for your marvelous review. I'm so glad you continue to enjoy this story. Joe is quite a prankster, so he deserves what he gets lol, but don't worry he'll get even.
Thank you again for all your encouragement and your support, it means a lot to me, take care.

Comment from ShirleyT1

Excellent

Your story is definitely a grabber of attention, from the title, cover and right through the story itself. I am looking forward to reading your prior chapters and discovering more about your well-defined characters. Great story-telling!

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

Thank you so much for such a fantastic review and for your high praise. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Take care

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Are Granny and Matilda the same person? I am still very confused. I'm glad Joe and Rachel finally let their interest in each other be known. Rachel is fun. No wonder Joe likes her. :)

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

Thank you for your kind review. No, Granny and Matilda are two different people. They're rivals from the past. That's why Granny is framing her for murder. Rachel is fun, a little sarcastic too. A perfect match for Joe.
Thank you again for your great review, your support and friendship; it means a lot to me, take care.

Comment from Bruno Thomas

Excellent

This is very good and very twisty and has turns I didn't expect. It is wild that you had Granny make partners in crime. Very heart beating reading this. Great job keep it going. Cheers, Brian

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

Thank you so much for such a wonderful review and encouraging words I'm so glad you liked it. Hope you'll stick around to the end.
Thank you again for your kind review, take care.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

You have written, again, a great chapter full of tintilating dialogue and repartee'. I love your characters and especially loved the 'getting married' prank. Well done and keep it coming.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

Thank you so much for such a wonderful review and your encouraging words. I'm glad you liked my prank. Don't worry Joe will get even again lol.
Thank you again for your kind review and all your support. It means a lot to me, take care.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Oh dear, looks like Jackie is going down now. Poor thing, what a life. Will she rat out Granny? Will she elude the police? Guess I'll have to wait for what comes next. Good job. Rox

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

Thank you for your kind review and encouraging praise. Jackie has had a very hard life as does a lot of children in the system. Is Granny willing to take a chance on Jackie or will she stop her for good?
Thank you again for all your support it means a lot to me, take care.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I wonder if Jackie will crack if she's questioned by the cops, chances are she well might. And going back to Granny's encounter with Jackie, who asks to join her in her killing spree to have some fun.
Rachel kids that Joe has asked her to marry him, at which Joe breaks into a cold sweat, have you seen a bit of my work dear friend, well done, good chapter, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you so much for your wonderful review, I'm glad you're enjoying Grany's little crime spree. She may be in trouble if Jackie opens her mouth tells them they have the wrong one. Poor Joe was sweating bullets for a minute that's for sure, lol.
I've read a little bit of your work. Your a great poet can write in a large variety of styles. The two I remember liking the best is I think I'll take it because there's a part about writing I can relate to, have the same feelings all the time. My second favorite is dust clothes the land because of its message.
Thank you again for your great review, take care.

reply by royowen on 03-Jul-2018

Well done