Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 2-4-2, Patriotic Posturing, distributes the eight syllables correctly and leads us to the reality that we are the nation of these qualities, which others do not share.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Very patriotic presentation with the flag and the colors and the poem which is accommodated by it. Much success to you in the contest a very good presentation

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

Comment from phill doran

Excellent

Hello Anon
Very well done in a very small space - three words: but they create an image, a position - provocative, in a good way.
I wish you well in the contest and with your writing.
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Straight and to the point, I like that. The reader can take your words, one of two ways. You're tired of the hoopla for Independence Day, or you're tired of independence. I hope it's the former. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

I meant that freedom and independence are good enough reasons to be American!!! Guess I need to go back and clarify. Thanks!

Comment from Angela Hayes

Excellent

Good read, educational, interesting, well presented, colourful flag, words to match,
creative use of words, very liberating, poetic, inspirational, back ground colour to match.

Good Luck!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018