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Holiday and Holyday Poetry

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religious and holiday poetry

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Comment from Pamusart
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Hi dovemarie. I hope you are doing well. Thank you for the Happy Indepence Day wishes. It is tomorrow. Yikes! But not going anywhere. Are you?

Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
    Dear Pamusart, Yes, I'm going to a club I attend for the recovering mentally ill. I have bi-polar and obsessive compulsive disorder, (thinking the same thoughts over and over again), we're having a cook-in, it's too hot outside. Have a Happy Independence Day! Dovemarie P. S. Thank you for your rating and comments.
reply by Pamusart on 04-Jul-2018
    I am bi polar. I understand you
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
    Dear Pamusart, Thanks for understanding. Dovemarie
Comment from Old Soldier
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The 4th, red white and blue. Freedom from our oppressors. We the people.... All men are created equal....life liberty and the pursuit..... We live in trying times.
I like your poem. Have a happy 4th and enjoy the day.
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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
    Dear Old Soldier, Thank you for your rating and comments. Hope you enjoy the day too. P.S. Are you a veteran? I just asked that question because of your Fan Story name. Dove
reply by Old Soldier on 04-Jul-2018
    Yes, twenty years retired.
Comment from jaded831
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Tells the story with flare. Your poem flows, is easy to read and is timely, with a universal appeal. Your picture and presentation adds to the piece. You get a thumbs up from me, thanks for sharing, I enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
    Dear jade831, Thanks for your comments and rating. Have a Happy Fourth! Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about inbdependence day. It was a struggle and many blood spilled on the fields to be able to say we reached independence but it is still a struggle today to maintain independence.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
    Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove