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Friendship on Fire

My Hearts Desire

6 total reviews 
Comment from Artasylum
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Hey Violet... I love this:
"I'm not looking for a fantasy or a knight in shining armor
I crave something more than fancy words and glamor."

I'm so happy to read a real look at love start to finish. I'm singing Hallelujah to this Poem... great write. yours, diana

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
    Thank you, Diana, for your wonderful review. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Charles Worthen
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A wonderful poem (particularly for this day and age) A true heart-felt desire for
real lasting love. Very specific words well written.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Charles. It certainly seems like a crazy idea some days but I can't be the only one left who craves something more. :)
Comment from fm wright
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You have put everything it seems that you are looking for in a relationship in such a beautiful, flowing way. If you are looking for faults in this one I personally have not found any.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
    Thank you so much for your beautiful review. Your six stars brought tears to my eyes and your kind words brought warmth to my heart. Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I think we are all looking for the same thing and you'd think with such unity in this wanting that we would find it! Alas such special people are hard to find, wonderfully rhymed words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
    Thank you, Dolly. I agree they are hard to find.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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Friendship, love and loyalty. Sounds simple, yet not easily found... This work is about values, deep thinking and vision! The wording is powerful and weighs on the eternal balance. I enjoyed it very much.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
    Thank you, Donka. It is a rare combination I think.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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I loved the photo and saying you chose to accompany your poem. You had some wonderful rhyming patterns throughout. Your writing feels honest and real to me. It also describes "real" love. :)

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
    Thank you, Cindy. For Your lovely review your words warm my heart.