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The Big Circle

writing prompt, swap quatrain

6 total reviews 
Comment from Sugarray77
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This is a great faith-filled poem that you have written for the Two Stanza prompt. I loved the flow and meanings you shared with us. Great job and good luck.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
    Dear Sugarray, Thank you for your rating and comments. Dove
Comment from Gloria ....
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Very interesting poetic form, author. It looks rather difficult using the swap line in both stanzas but you've done a fine job with it.

Best of luck to you in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
    Dear Gloria, Thank you for your rating, comments, and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I'm not familiar with this form of poetry but your message comes across loud and clear and I wish you luck with the contest, Heaven sent is a big circle, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
    Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments, rating and good luck wishes. Donna
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Nice swap quatrain composed in very good form, Anonymous Poet
The context of your contest entry is both inspirational and quite spiritual.
Good luck!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
    Dear Dean, Haven't heard from you for a long time! I think I'll go in and find one of your poems. Thank you for your rating, comments and good luck wishes.
Comment from victor 66
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This poem seems to run in circles. (Just kidding) I do believe there is a circle in all of life. I don't always include God in my thought processes. I just don't feel his presence like others do. For me, I know I've made mistakes but I believe I did the best I could. I'm not afraid of death nor of what lies after death. I believe I'll go where ever I belong. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
    Dear victor 66, Thank you for your rating and comments, and your good luck wishes. Dove
reply by victor 66 on 03-Jul-2018
    Of course, and you are most welcome, Dove.
Comment from rspoet
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This is a fine two stanza poem and entry for the contest
with solid rhymes in the middle of each stanza
Excellent theme many will relate to
and interesting art work
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
    Dear rspoet, Thank you for your comments, rating and good luck wishes. Dove