Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

A very interesting party. I would be good the stick around for the judging and see who won. My wife and I attended a birthday party for a young boy. His parents had hired a guy dressed as Barney for the entertainment. At the end of the party, he walked to his car and took off his headpiece. I said, "Oh, no. Barney just pulled his head off."

We weren't invited the following year.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018

So funny! I saw a People?s Court where a family sued the entertainment company for sending a Smurf character who was six foot six and looked like a big blue Frankenstein monster. The kids are probably still in therapy.

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

These guys have a whole lot to say to each other and their exchanges as humorous and I love the language. Thanks so much. Looking forward... Yours, Diana

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018

Thanks, Diana

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. An amusing dialogue, totally misunderstood, of two friends dressed as cartoon characters for a masquerade. Brings back memories of those Saturday morning cartoons as a kid. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

Thanks, Marilyn.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Bill,

That was fun. *smile* These poor guys are always up to some silly nonsense. But then, we count on that, don't we? hahaha!

This was a new one for me - I think AS I was reading, you must have been editing -- it changed wHILE I read it. The 'Neds' turned from black to green. Am I nuts???

Thanks - I enjoyed!

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

Huh. I did change the names from black to Ned=red and Pons=green, but that was before I posted it.

reply by robyn corum on 04-Jul-2018

huh. I don't know. When I started reading, one of the names was just in simple black, and by the end they both had colors. So I went back up to see when it changed and they were colored all the way down. I guess I am crazy.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, hahahahaha, how I wished I had a six. I love Ned and Pons, they are priceless,and being at a costume party doesn't help the matter a great deal. Wonderful! All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018

Thank you, Ulla.

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

I always get a kick out of Ned and Pons! These two need their own comedy show on television, and I have no doubt you could make that work!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you, Brenda. I really enjoy these two.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 03-Jul-2018

You're welcome, Bill. :)

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

Hi Bill,
You did a great job with the scene setting and character
Profiles.
The language is consistent with cartoon speak and you had some fun along the way.
ð??? Shirley

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thanks, Shirley.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

very well done, Bill. the vernacular is great and dose guys is dumb but lovable. I enjoy these characters........meeshu

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you, meeshu.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your script with these 2 character. I like the original roadrunner & coyote & thee 2 were hilarious as them. I like the color coding of the dialogue. I also liked the regional dialect you included. These 2 can come up with some funny 'stuff'--the flamingo lines were great.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you, Jan. I sometime use the boys to top off an animal world. This was i5 for Roadrunner World.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Oh my land, for a second there I thought I was back at the Overlook Hotel, but then I noticed there was no snow outside and all was good again.

Ha, another zany and fun-filled journey through the minds of Ned and Pons. These two characters will be famous one day.

A most fun read.

Gloria

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thanks, Gloria.