Perennials of War
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Comment from pbomar1115
From the looks of it, there seem to be some heartstrings being pulled between Shana and Anderson. Only one problem. There is a barrier, preventing them from getting together. Sorry, I don't know what it is.
Phillip
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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From the looks of it, there seem to be some heartstrings being pulled between Shana and Anderson. Only one problem. There is a barrier, preventing them from getting together. Sorry, I don't know what it is.
Phillip
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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The barrier is Shana is a devout Jew. Anderson is not. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
I am writing your review as I listen to one of my favorite songs from one of my favorite singers, Kenny Chesney. My daughter is going to be so bummed she was not here as I did this (they are all down at the beach). I continue to enjoy your novel - this unexpected addition just topped it off.
jan
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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barbara:
I am writing your review as I listen to one of my favorite songs from one of my favorite singers, Kenny Chesney. My daughter is going to be so bummed she was not here as I did this (they are all down at the beach). I continue to enjoy your novel - this unexpected addition just topped it off.
jan
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. Kenny may be at the beach. LOL
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
Stan and I wish you and your family have a nice time with each other.
I will tell you Barb you put me in a happy mood all with the dinner, the conversation and how every one danced with the music of the piano, violin, and guitar until
Shana watched Anderson walk away. Tears rolled down her cheeks, and she said under her breath. "That song was too personal. Zack did it on purpose, didn't he?
WHY did Shana get upset
Gert
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Hello Barb
Stan and I wish you and your family have a nice time with each other.
I will tell you Barb you put me in a happy mood all with the dinner, the conversation and how every one danced with the music of the piano, violin, and guitar until
Shana watched Anderson walk away. Tears rolled down her cheeks, and she said under her breath. "That song was too personal. Zack did it on purpose, didn't he?
WHY did Shana get upset
Gert
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Because she knew why Drew walked about. More will come hopefully on Sunday, if I get go post. I hope so. Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you Barb for filling me of what is going on.
Gert
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Barbara
Enjoyed the continuation. So the quiet romance between Shana and Anderson goes on despite (or in spite of) Jeff. The conversations at the diner table were spot on. I had the feeling I was there watching everything unfold. Haven't heard of this card game mentioned -- pinochle -- in a very long time. My parents and my father's brothers used to play this incessantly when I was a mere child. Well done.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Good morning, Barbara
Enjoyed the continuation. So the quiet romance between Shana and Anderson goes on despite (or in spite of) Jeff. The conversations at the diner table were spot on. I had the feeling I was there watching everything unfold. Haven't heard of this card game mentioned -- pinochle -- in a very long time. My parents and my father's brothers used to play this incessantly when I was a mere child. Well done.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Jeff is not a threat to Drew's and Shana's romance. He's just a trusted friend. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Artasylum
Have a lovely vacation Barbra... your writing, character development and background development... Great job... yours, diana
"Leon left and returned with two large, leather cases. "I think we need to lighten the atmosphere. Drew's arm will heal and the good guys won. We came for a celebration so let's celebrate. We can't let this get us down. We need to praise God that everything turned out as well as it did."
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Have a lovely vacation Barbra... your writing, character development and background development... Great job... yours, diana
"Leon left and returned with two large, leather cases. "I think we need to lighten the atmosphere. Drew's arm will heal and the good guys won. We came for a celebration so let's celebrate. We can't let this get us down. We need to praise God that everything turned out as well as it did."
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
What sort of song was it that was so upsetting to bring tears? Why can't Shana and Drew just forget what parents want and think about what THEY want. They need to get together... but I guess that has to wait till the end after they deal with the bad guys and the mystery of the painting. :)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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What sort of song was it that was so upsetting to bring tears? Why can't Shana and Drew just forget what parents want and think about what THEY want. They need to get together... but I guess that has to wait till the end after they deal with the bad guys and the mystery of the painting. :)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Good questions??? Poor Shana. I can promise all of this will be dealt with or I hope I get it all. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Enjoy your summer and family Priceless moment with them all. Especially, your mother. U know I will always be here on your side as the story seems to be heading toward an interesting turn. Stay safe out there. My blessings to you and all.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Enjoy your summer and family Priceless moment with them all. Especially, your mother. U know I will always be here on your side as the story seems to be heading toward an interesting turn. Stay safe out there. My blessings to you and all.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Wonderful details about the family in this. Anderson's reaction to the song is great. It shows that he isn't always the strong, in-charge guy he tries to be. Shana's resistance may have finally been overcome. Zachery seems to force the issue just a wee bit. I'm sure Shana is going to come around. Excellent work as always, very thoughtful. You certainly deserve a six. judi
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Wonderful details about the family in this. Anderson's reaction to the song is great. It shows that he isn't always the strong, in-charge guy he tries to be. Shana's resistance may have finally been overcome. Zachery seems to force the issue just a wee bit. I'm sure Shana is going to come around. Excellent work as always, very thoughtful. You certainly deserve a six. judi
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. I have a sneaking feeling, Jeff's no nonsense way is going to play an important role too. LOL
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You're welcome. I am enjoying this story so much. judi
Comment from Sasha
I enjoyed this chapter very much. It seems Shana now has to speak to Drew... it will be hard for her. Have a wonderful trip and don't worry about us. Enjoy your family and don't worry about posting. We will all be here when you return.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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I enjoyed this chapter very much. It seems Shana now has to speak to Drew... it will be hard for her. Have a wonderful trip and don't worry about us. Enjoy your family and don't worry about posting. We will all be here when you return.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from apky
Hello Barbara,
Just popped in to check the overflowing inbox and had a look at what Drew and Shana are up to. I think I missed a chapter but I still got the story and enjoyed the read. I wonder how Shana hurt Drew, but I'll have to wait another week (hopefully I'll check in time to catch the next chapter.)
BTW, you advertised one of your books here; was it worthwhile?
Till next. My suggestions are below.
>>He stopped and faced her.<< ~ Why is he stopping, had he been moving? The last posture he had was he "put his arms around her shoulders."
>>Shana stared as she watched Anderson walk away.<< ~ Have her stare or watch - not both.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Hello Barbara,
Just popped in to check the overflowing inbox and had a look at what Drew and Shana are up to. I think I missed a chapter but I still got the story and enjoyed the read. I wonder how Shana hurt Drew, but I'll have to wait another week (hopefully I'll check in time to catch the next chapter.)
BTW, you advertised one of your books here; was it worthwhile?
Till next. My suggestions are below.
>>He stopped and faced her.<< ~ Why is he stopping, had he been moving? The last posture he had was he "put his arms around her shoulders."
>>Shana stared as she watched Anderson walk away.<< ~ Have her stare or watch - not both.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the suggestions and I made the corrections. The first month I paid for the advertisement did pay off. I added a second month and it did not. I don't think I got any sales from it the second time.
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Thanks for letting me know about the ads, Barbara. Really appreciate.
