Ocean Whispers
6 word poem contest12 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a 'Six Word' contest entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well .
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This is a 'Six Word' contest entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well .
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-word poem, Ocean Whispers, finds me recalling listening to the shells on the beach when I was younger. My siblings convinced me that they were having conversations with the sea creatures via these beach phones. I, of course, heard them too.
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This six-word poem, Ocean Whispers, finds me recalling listening to the shells on the beach when I was younger. My siblings convinced me that they were having conversations with the sea creatures via these beach phones. I, of course, heard them too.
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your review. That's very funny. It was a secret revealed to me one day at the beach. I was listening intently for what the sea had to say.
