Ocean Whispers
6 word poem contest12 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem about the seashells on the beach that had its life in the ocean and brings with it a whispered message from the ocean when we hold it against our ear.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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A very well-written six-word poem about the seashells on the beach that had its life in the ocean and brings with it a whispered message from the ocean when we hold it against our ear.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a good contest entry, Magic Dragon. Your picture is perfect for your well-chosen words. You give readers much to think about. What secrets is the ocean telling through the shells? Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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This is a good contest entry, Magic Dragon. Your picture is perfect for your well-chosen words. You give readers much to think about. What secrets is the ocean telling through the shells? Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Comment from donette1914
this is written so well on the six word poetry and the whispers from the ocean
thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read your work
i like the artwork
it was an honor and i hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 16 2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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this is written so well on the six word poetry and the whispers from the ocean
thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read your work
i like the artwork
it was an honor and i hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 16 2018
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks vividly and simply how you listen to ocean whispers from the sea shells before you; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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This speaks vividly and simply how you listen to ocean whispers from the sea shells before you; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
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Comment from tfawcus
I used to love holding an empty seashell to my ear when I was a child. I lived a long way from the sea, and the sound took me straight back to blissful days of summer holidays. I did enjoy this one!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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I used to love holding an empty seashell to my ear when I was a child. I lived a long way from the sea, and the sound took me straight back to blissful days of summer holidays. I did enjoy this one!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
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Comment from Renee J. St.Germain
Your poetry is lovely. It brings me back to the beach and me picking up seashells listening for the ocean. It's a calming poem, and I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Your poetry is lovely. It brings me back to the beach and me picking up seashells listening for the ocean. It's a calming poem, and I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
This is AWESOME. I can picture myself as a child holding the shells to my ear to listen to the magic of the sea. STUNNING. Well-written six-words of poetry. I enjoyed. I hope you do well in the contest. Great entry!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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This is AWESOME. I can picture myself as a child holding the shells to my ear to listen to the magic of the sea. STUNNING. Well-written six-words of poetry. I enjoyed. I hope you do well in the contest. Great entry!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
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Comment from Tootie
Well chosen words and great presentation. Anyone who reads this will automatically remember putting a shell up to their ear and hearing the ocean. Wishing you the very best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Well chosen words and great presentation. Anyone who reads this will automatically remember putting a shell up to their ear and hearing the ocean. Wishing you the very best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
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Comment from Therese103
This is a very good entry for the six word poetry contest. I think that the picture you chose really helps make an impact on the reader. And I love the implication that sea shells are haunted by the faraway sound of the ocean.
Blessings, Therese
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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This is a very good entry for the six word poetry contest. I think that the picture you chose really helps make an impact on the reader. And I love the implication that sea shells are haunted by the faraway sound of the ocean.
Blessings, Therese
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
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Comment from Poemster98
Deep and insightful. Great effort! It's hard to write something meaningful in six words. Even the famous "rose" poem has more than that! I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Deep and insightful. Great effort! It's hard to write something meaningful in six words. Even the famous "rose" poem has more than that! I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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