Haiku and Senryu Suites
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Comment from Cranial Thinker
Have you noticed that there has been a call for the oneness of breath to know in the divine way not those thoughts of mans selfish intent build unto himself instead of understanding the universe held within himself which factually connects him to the whole of all breaths past present and those yet to have a personified voice incased in the flesh that must learn the true love of its likened tie to that which knows the stars the fragrances of his birth and all that beautifies his eyes of minds universal connectivity for it is that oneness I seek because in doing so the universe will open up to my inner outer soul and my mind will come to understand the galaxies is my natural place of loves lands in breaths heartfelt born of births truest intent, simply saying I'm home and that's all I have to say....A most wonderful write again my truest Brother B. I really enjoyed this read for sure thanks for sharing....Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Have you noticed that there has been a call for the oneness of breath to know in the divine way not those thoughts of mans selfish intent build unto himself instead of understanding the universe held within himself which factually connects him to the whole of all breaths past present and those yet to have a personified voice incased in the flesh that must learn the true love of its likened tie to that which knows the stars the fragrances of his birth and all that beautifies his eyes of minds universal connectivity for it is that oneness I seek because in doing so the universe will open up to my inner outer soul and my mind will come to understand the galaxies is my natural place of loves lands in breaths heartfelt born of births truest intent, simply saying I'm home and that's all I have to say....A most wonderful write again my truest Brother B. I really enjoyed this read for sure thanks for sharing....Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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I am very thankful to know you here, and seed by your depth of understanding.
We meet and read at the right times, as visionaries. We both have a purpose, value, and responsibility here. You are doing an outstanding job of fulfilling these traits.
Thank-you,
And peace be with you
Brother Badger
Comment from kahpot
An excellent poem and posing a very interesting question, I think I would have to choose to be me and learning to be happy with who and what I am and have become, very well done I like this very much****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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An excellent poem and posing a very interesting question, I think I would have to choose to be me and learning to be happy with who and what I am and have become, very well done I like this very much****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review, this was somewhat experimental but I was trying to convey a philosophical sense. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate your comments.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from royowen
A beautifully Written Freeverse Darren, yes indeed, those great pollinators have a great deal with the survival of man, an excellent job with this work my friend,, blesings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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A beautifully Written Freeverse Darren, yes indeed, those great pollinators have a great deal with the survival of man, an excellent job with this work my friend,, blesings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thanks so much for your comments and your wonderful review, I'm glad you enjoyed this. As you can see butterflies and metamorphosis and such have been and main theme of A lot of my writing lately. I really appreciate your comments and input.
Blessings,
Darren
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Most welcome
