Worth the Wait
Change of season.6 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Your line, "As Mother Nature gives birth, life decorates the earth" really caught my eye! Spring is a great season (my favorite). I enjoyed your descriptive poem without using the go-to spring words. What a great entry to this contest. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Your line, "As Mother Nature gives birth, life decorates the earth" really caught my eye! Spring is a great season (my favorite). I enjoyed your descriptive poem without using the go-to spring words. What a great entry to this contest. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thans so much.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Yep it's Sping alright as you so delightful it describe the various things that happened in spring in the things that are done I love it entire presentation along with the artwork since the atmosphere for a Spring announcement good things to do
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Yep it's Sping alright as you so delightful it describe the various things that happened in spring in the things that are done I love it entire presentation along with the artwork since the atmosphere for a Spring announcement good things to do
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thanks so much.
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My pleasure
Comment from Henry King
The poem has an excellent premise for the Poem for Spring writing prompt. It starts with several end rhyming couplets, but falls apart with odd line endings. For example, end the 6th line at "birth," and move life to the seventh line. This allows the end words, "birth and earth" to rhyme. Leave the eighth line as is, but move "iced tea" to the next line allowing "splashing and sipping" to end rhyme those two lines. You have written the rest of the poem to allow the same type of word movement. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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The poem has an excellent premise for the Poem for Spring writing prompt. It starts with several end rhyming couplets, but falls apart with odd line endings. For example, end the 6th line at "birth," and move life to the seventh line. This allows the end words, "birth and earth" to rhyme. Leave the eighth line as is, but move "iced tea" to the next line allowing "splashing and sipping" to end rhyme those two lines. You have written the rest of the poem to allow the same type of word movement. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thanks.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks change in season, how temperature in the atmosphere grows and man can go for basking in the sun worth the waiting; spring comes; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This speaks change in season, how temperature in the atmosphere grows and man can go for basking in the sun worth the waiting; spring comes; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. Your words create great imagery & do 'forecast' spring. We had no spring--skipped right to summer with 100+ temps many days. Good job with the prompt. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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You did a great job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. Your words create great imagery & do 'forecast' spring. We had no spring--skipped right to summer with 100+ temps many days. Good job with the prompt. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and yes it is wonderful when the waiting is over and the time to bask in the sun is here, very well written and good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Excellent and yes it is wonderful when the waiting is over and the time to bask in the sun is here, very well written and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thanks.
