Sadness
The loss of my daughter has left me grieving daily.38 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
I feel your loss as you penned the words. Yet, to forget that spirit that is your heart would be far worst that sadness. I pray that love will ease your heart, comfort your soul and grant you peace. She is watching you cry and her heart is breaking. She wants you to carry on and smile.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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I feel your loss as you penned the words. Yet, to forget that spirit that is your heart would be far worst that sadness. I pray that love will ease your heart, comfort your soul and grant you peace. She is watching you cry and her heart is breaking. She wants you to carry on and smile.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This was difficult to write but I find it helpful to put feelings into words. Sharing keeps her memory alive. Thank you for reading and the kind comments. Thank you for your sensitive words they will help me mend in time.
Have a good weekend.
Mystery writer
Comment from jenintorre
I am so sorry for your loss. This is such a sad and poignant poem. It brought tears to my eyes. Very well chosen artwork. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. God bless Jen.
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I am so sorry for your loss. This is such a sad and poignant poem. It brought tears to my eyes. Very well chosen artwork. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. God bless Jen.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This was difficult to write but I find it helpful to put feelings into words. Sharing keeps her memory alive. Thank you for reading and the kind comments.
Have a good weekend.
Mystery writer
Comment from misscookie
My heart goes out to you for your lost
For I too lost a beautiful daughter Feb 6 2006 from a tumor on her brain
Today is her birthday and that another knife in my heart To hold it together I think of the story told to me years ago All the children were siting next to Jesus laughing and having fun except for one
Jesus asked why she sat apart from the others Jesus, I watch the sadness of my mother every day and night I feel sorrow for her that I fill guilty to go and have fun when she is in so much pain
one day a angel came down and told what was going on with her daughter
the next day the mother play happy music cleaning her house, caring for her garden, and join a women club and
helping other people going through storms
now the Daughter is happy sitting with Jesus and the rest of the children
Cookie
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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My heart goes out to you for your lost
For I too lost a beautiful daughter Feb 6 2006 from a tumor on her brain
Today is her birthday and that another knife in my heart To hold it together I think of the story told to me years ago All the children were siting next to Jesus laughing and having fun except for one
Jesus asked why she sat apart from the others Jesus, I watch the sadness of my mother every day and night I feel sorrow for her that I fill guilty to go and have fun when she is in so much pain
one day a angel came down and told what was going on with her daughter
the next day the mother play happy music cleaning her house, caring for her garden, and join a women club and
helping other people going through storms
now the Daughter is happy sitting with Jesus and the rest of the children
Cookie
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This was difficult to write but I find it helpful to put feelings into words. Sharing keeps her memory alive. Thank you for reading and the kind comments. Wow! Your story brought tears to my eyes, also. Your words gave me hope to find the strength to mend and I thank you. I will go forth to mend for I know I will join her again in a better place. Yes, there will be days when the pain is worse than ever but she would not want me to cry but help care for her children left behind ages 5 and 18. We talk about mommy. I told the little one every time she sees a ladybug, a butterfly, or a feather, it is mommy coming to see her to say I love you.
Teary eyed,
Mystery writer
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God bless you for raising her children you see God blessed you with more ways than one to rejoice for I know you a see her in the children and it's remember they know when your sad and its not good to let them see you sad
Dianne never had any children
She loved butterflies her friends say when they see them its her checking on them. she comes and checks on me every now and then
You stay on praying grounds it will ease up some, in due time
Cookie
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Yes, she left me in trust with her babies. One day we will reunite and catch up on everything . Love through faith will be my path.
Have a blessed Sunday!
Mystery writer.
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That is wonderful God say the same I will met you there and met you at last
I wonder if our daughters are friends up their.
I know that world is different from ours
Cookie
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Both are our angels watching over us.
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True that
Cookie
Comment from Janet Foor
I am so very sorry for your loss. No parent should have to go though the loss of a child. Your emotion is very clear thoughout this poem. I hope writing it has given you some comfort. I always feel that writing is carthardic and helpful especially is difficult times.
Well done and wishing you the very best.
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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I am so very sorry for your loss. No parent should have to go though the loss of a child. Your emotion is very clear thoughout this poem. I hope writing it has given you some comfort. I always feel that writing is carthardic and helpful especially is difficult times.
Well done and wishing you the very best.
Janet
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This was difficult to write but I find it helpful to put feelings into words. Sharing keeps her memory alive. Thank you for reading and the kind comments.
Have a good weekend.
Mystery writer
Comment from Commando
An 'AWESOME' Biographical Poetry presentation, Mystery Writer! Therapeutically written, yet heart-wrenching. Having walked a mile in your shoes, might I recommend, "Let the sad yesterdays go and walk to the happy tomorrows in your life." God willing, you shall find peace of mind. The artwork by Seshadri Sreenivasan is astonishing! Best wishes for a contest win and God bless.
My deepest sympathies,
Bill
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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An 'AWESOME' Biographical Poetry presentation, Mystery Writer! Therapeutically written, yet heart-wrenching. Having walked a mile in your shoes, might I recommend, "Let the sad yesterdays go and walk to the happy tomorrows in your life." God willing, you shall find peace of mind. The artwork by Seshadri Sreenivasan is astonishing! Best wishes for a contest win and God bless.
My deepest sympathies,
Bill
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This was difficult to write but I find it helpful to put feelings into words. Sharing keeps her memory alive. Thank you for reading and the kind comments. The six star was an honor to receive.
Have a good weekend.
Mystery writer
Comment from TPAC
I found this write with many pleasant details creative and inspiring to heart.
Suggest:
Sadness
The snoring brain feed,
also:
Sadness
it ditched to live.
Just my opinion of a possible enhancement to this presentation.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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I found this write with many pleasant details creative and inspiring to heart.
Suggest:
Sadness
The snoring brain feed,
also:
Sadness
it ditched to live.
Just my opinion of a possible enhancement to this presentation.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This was difficult to write but I find it helpful to put feelings into words. Sharing keeps her memory alive. Thank you for reading and the kind comments. Thank you for the suggestions.
Have a good weekend.
Mystery writer
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the message of this. You've definitely got to ditch sadness to live and replace it with gladness. Sadness is a spiralling staircase that always goes down, no going up button anywhere to be found. You've done a fine job capturing and staying true to the theme of this throughout. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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I like the message of this. You've definitely got to ditch sadness to live and replace it with gladness. Sadness is a spiralling staircase that always goes down, no going up button anywhere to be found. You've done a fine job capturing and staying true to the theme of this throughout. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This was difficult to write but I find it helpful to put feelings into words. Sharing keeps her memory alive. Thank you for reading and the kind comments.
Have a good weekend.
Mystery writer
Comment from Dean Kuch
I am truly very sorry for the recent loss of your dear daughter.
I can't imagine losing one of my children.
When we lose someone we love dearly it tears a gaping hole in the fabric of our hearts.
They take a piece of us with them when they go.
It matters little if we lose them to the cruel clutches of death and the cold confines of the grave. Or, they simply decide one day to walk away, out of our lives and never look back.
Like any rip or tear in most fabrics, the hole can and will be mended in time--if the seamstress is skilled enough.
Still, no matter how skilled the seamstress, the evidence that there was once a hole forever lingers.
I think loosing a loved one is a lot like that, in many respects.
You have my deepest sympathies.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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I am truly very sorry for the recent loss of your dear daughter.
I can't imagine losing one of my children.
When we lose someone we love dearly it tears a gaping hole in the fabric of our hearts.
They take a piece of us with them when they go.
It matters little if we lose them to the cruel clutches of death and the cold confines of the grave. Or, they simply decide one day to walk away, out of our lives and never look back.
Like any rip or tear in most fabrics, the hole can and will be mended in time--if the seamstress is skilled enough.
Still, no matter how skilled the seamstress, the evidence that there was once a hole forever lingers.
I think loosing a loved one is a lot like that, in many respects.
You have my deepest sympathies.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Yes, dear friend, a rip and tear, well stated. This seamstress is mending by sharing and putting her feelings to the paper. The hole is cavernous and time will fill it with memories. faith in God will see me through and meander toward reuniting.
Thank you so much, Dean ,for these lovely words.
Have a good weekend.
Mystery writer
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You are very welcome.
Take care.
~Dean
Comment from Artasylum
I say amen to every verse in this very sad poem... The presentation is perfect pitch... I love every thing about it and would love to have a six to show you... they are gone and I can't even bookmark that thought because I don't know who you are. yours, diana
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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I say amen to every verse in this very sad poem... The presentation is perfect pitch... I love every thing about it and would love to have a six to show you... they are gone and I can't even bookmark that thought because I don't know who you are. yours, diana
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This was difficult to write but I find it helpful to put feelings into words. Sharing keeps her memory alive. Thank you for reading and the kind comments.
Have a good weekend.
Mystery writer
Comment from Pantygynt
Mourning is of course a natural reaction to a lost loved onee but it has to be said that it is one of the most selfish of emotions. Under those circumstances we are sad for what we have lost when really, if we believe we should be joyful over the loved one's gaining the joy of heaven. Perhaps a thought along those lines might help. I would hope so.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Mourning is of course a natural reaction to a lost loved onee but it has to be said that it is one of the most selfish of emotions. Under those circumstances we are sad for what we have lost when really, if we believe we should be joyful over the loved one's gaining the joy of heaven. Perhaps a thought along those lines might help. I would hope so.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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This was difficult to write but I find it helpful to put feelings into words. Sharing keeps her memory alive. Thank you for reading and the kind comments. She is in God's grace and always present in thoughts and love.
Have a good weekend.
Mystery writer
