Love for us all
God's Gift35 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Love for us all", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work is a spiritually up-lifting and heart warming piece. Every line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is definitely a six.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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"Love for us all", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work is a spiritually up-lifting and heart warming piece. Every line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is definitely a six.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Wow! Thank you so very much for something I am just trying this is very special****kahpot
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kahpot, "Wow", to you too....... !(-_-)!
Take care and God bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A very nice cinquain. You've done a good job using the title to add just a little more information--necessary for the form to be perfect. A lovely statement of faith and devotion. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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A very nice cinquain. You've done a good job using the title to add just a little more information--necessary for the form to be perfect. A lovely statement of faith and devotion. :) Nancy
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from misscookie
I love the words to your write And the artwork you choose is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the start
This is truly a food for thought write
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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I love the words to your write And the artwork you choose is a perfect match
You captured my attention from the start
This is truly a food for thought write
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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my pleasure, until next time
cookie
Comment from friartuck
A fine cinquain indeed, and full of eternal truth to boot. It's balanced, to the point, and accurate as well. And it doesn't feel forced at all. A fine first effort, and one that should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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A fine cinquain indeed, and full of eternal truth to boot. It's balanced, to the point, and accurate as well. And it doesn't feel forced at all. A fine first effort, and one that should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, most encouraging****kahpot
Comment from Pamusart
Hi sweet kahpot. I hope you are happy and healthy tonight. This is a good entry for the contest. I am glad that you take comfort in your faith. Sharing with an open heart is good for everyone to do. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Hi sweet kahpot. I hope you are happy and healthy tonight. This is a good entry for the contest. I am glad that you take comfort in your faith. Sharing with an open heart is good for everyone to do. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, My friend, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
Your poem has a spiritual feel and flow to it. I like the rhyming words bear and share, they add to the strength of the poem. I am only recently become familiar with the cinquain form and it seems to me, you did well with this form.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Your poem has a spiritual feel and flow to it. I like the rhyming words bear and share, they add to the strength of the poem. I am only recently become familiar with the cinquain form and it seems to me, you did well with this form.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Great way to convey the Great Commission (Matthew 28:19-20) in this little cinquain! I like that you managed a rhyme in the process, too.
I don't think you need any of your commas. If any place could use a comma, it would have been after the first line.
You have a thought-provoking change in pronouns. It's Christ Who gave love and that is personalized in the first person. But it changes to second person "Asks of you" in the fourth line giving me the feeling that the natural thing of receiving Jesus' love is to look outward to others and "Share."
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Great way to convey the Great Commission (Matthew 28:19-20) in this little cinquain! I like that you managed a rhyme in the process, too.
I don't think you need any of your commas. If any place could use a comma, it would have been after the first line.
You have a thought-provoking change in pronouns. It's Christ Who gave love and that is personalized in the first person. But it changes to second person "Asks of you" in the fourth line giving me the feeling that the natural thing of receiving Jesus' love is to look outward to others and "Share."
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much I took your advice and only 1 coma remains many thanks, so very helpful with your reviews****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork.
-Notes appreciated. I enjoy the
cinquain form, as well.
-Your syllable count is good.
-You have made effective use of
one continuous thought, and
sharing a good message with
the addition of rhyme.
-Thanks for sharing KAHPOT.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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-Good artwork.
-Notes appreciated. I enjoy the
cinquain form, as well.
-Your syllable count is good.
-You have made effective use of
one continuous thought, and
sharing a good message with
the addition of rhyme.
-Thanks for sharing KAHPOT.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, very encouraging****kahpot
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You are very welcome.
Comment from jaded831
A very well written poem. Your words bring a powerful message to all. The artwork is strong and helps to bring your words home. And home is where the heart is, let's share the love. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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A very well written poem. Your words bring a powerful message to all. The artwork is strong and helps to bring your words home. And home is where the heart is, let's share the love. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dean Kuch
Trying new forms of poetic expression only helps you to become a more well-rounded poet, kahpot.
Shakespearean sonnets were my nemesis until I kept doing them, over, and over again.
Your cinquain has the 2-4-6-8-2 syllabic count this form requires.
Nice work, good luck in the judging.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Trying new forms of poetic expression only helps you to become a more well-rounded poet, kahpot.
Shakespearean sonnets were my nemesis until I kept doing them, over, and over again.
Your cinquain has the 2-4-6-8-2 syllabic count this form requires.
Nice work, good luck in the judging.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Thank you and yes it is giving me a better understanding of other works as well****kahpot
