Diving Into Alligators
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Comment from A. Willow Bends
What imagination. I remember those days. Nothing negative to say here. Love the poem. Love the picture attached. Great job. Good rhyme and flow. Creative and makes us yearn for days gone by. Good Luck!
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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What imagination. I remember those days. Nothing negative to say here. Love the poem. Love the picture attached. Great job. Good rhyme and flow. Creative and makes us yearn for days gone by. Good Luck!
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Hey Wendy,
So happy to have you here and thanks for the lovely thoughtful review. Yours, diana
Comment from Hitcher
I too can remember that, I'm invincible feeling from my youth, oh to have it back : ) Age, accidents, pain and reality slowly taught me the truth... when gators bite, you bleed, ha ha. Always a pleasure reading you and yours friend.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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I too can remember that, I'm invincible feeling from my youth, oh to have it back : ) Age, accidents, pain and reality slowly taught me the truth... when gators bite, you bleed, ha ha. Always a pleasure reading you and yours friend.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Hey, Hey, Hitcher,
So happy to have you here and thanks for the lovely thoughtful review. Yours, diana
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Diving Into Alligators", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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"Diving Into Alligators", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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So happy to have you here and thanks for the lovely thoughtful review. Yours, diana
Comment from donette1914
wow this is a true artist and the words where amazing and i love the artwork, simply amazing!!! It was a pleasure to read this well penned poem and thank you for sharing donette1914 july 2, 2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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wow this is a true artist and the words where amazing and i love the artwork, simply amazing!!! It was a pleasure to read this well penned poem and thank you for sharing donette1914 july 2, 2018
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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I'm honored donnette1914,
So happy to have you here and thanks for the lovely thoughtful review. Yours, diana
Comment from jdrhye
Oh yea to be young and think yourself invincible. Yikes! A scary poem as just how lucky we are as children it's like we have our very own group of angels to keep us safe from ourselves. I now my son had a whole team of angels well into his late 20's! Good write, good read.
J
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Oh yea to be young and think yourself invincible. Yikes! A scary poem as just how lucky we are as children it's like we have our very own group of angels to keep us safe from ourselves. I now my son had a whole team of angels well into his late 20's! Good write, good read.
J
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Say Hallelujah... the follies of youth. yours, diana
Comment from Beto1
Humorous poem of our nativity when we were young. I remember when I was eight I ran around with thumbtacks in my mouth and needle darts in my hand. I had no fear nor did I understand the consequence of swallowing a thumbtack haha. The picture of the innocent girl supplements her fearless mindset in jumping in a lake infested with gators. Very nice job!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Humorous poem of our nativity when we were young. I remember when I was eight I ran around with thumbtacks in my mouth and needle darts in my hand. I had no fear nor did I understand the consequence of swallowing a thumbtack haha. The picture of the innocent girl supplements her fearless mindset in jumping in a lake infested with gators. Very nice job!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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The good old days. Yours, diana
Comment from Tootie
When we were kids, we were fearless. It's a wonder we survived many of the things we went through. However, to truly live many times means to get past the imaginary wall of fear that holds us back. Well-written and said. I love the title and the picture too. Dinky Dock...awesome! Blessings! - Cathy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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When we were kids, we were fearless. It's a wonder we survived many of the things we went through. However, to truly live many times means to get past the imaginary wall of fear that holds us back. Well-written and said. I love the title and the picture too. Dinky Dock...awesome! Blessings! - Cathy
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Say Amen to that Tootie... thanks so much kiddo... yours, diana
Comment from meeshu
the wonder of being a kid on a dock in the middle of a July afternoon surrounded by water and clouds and fanciful thoughts. I wonder if kids today have an app for that. loved your poem Diana............meeshu
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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the wonder of being a kid on a dock in the middle of a July afternoon surrounded by water and clouds and fanciful thoughts. I wonder if kids today have an app for that. loved your poem Diana............meeshu
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Hey meeshu...
They probably have and app and most likely the alligators and water moccasins kill them... thanks so much yours, diana
Comment from kahpot
Yes, I can relate to this, as a youngster I used to swim in rivers crocodiles were our nemesis, Yah to be young, an excellent poem one that will bring back memories for many very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Yes, I can relate to this, as a youngster I used to swim in rivers crocodiles were our nemesis, Yah to be young, an excellent poem one that will bring back memories for many very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Hey kahpot,
So happy to have you here and thanks for the lovely thoughtful review. Yours, diana
Comment from bob cullen
I adored that first line. It tells of childish innocence and their unlimited imagination. I think every little girl fancied being a mermaid and little boys wanted to be a spaceman and have his very own mermaid. Sadly, I never achieved either that accounts for my now dreaming to be a writer.
I loved the imagery and memories your poem evoked
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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I adored that first line. It tells of childish innocence and their unlimited imagination. I think every little girl fancied being a mermaid and little boys wanted to be a spaceman and have his very own mermaid. Sadly, I never achieved either that accounts for my now dreaming to be a writer.
I loved the imagery and memories your poem evoked
Comment Written 02-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Hey Bob Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my poem... I respect and look forward to your thoughts. yours, diana
