Comment from kaymart

Excellent

I'm quite fond of photos like this, and the poem accompanying it is fabulously written! He certainly IS with us! Are you a KJV user? That's the impression I get when reading the verse you quoted. I love the KJV! It's by far my favourite English Bible version to use.
I've wanted to write some things like this for a long time. But I'm not a poet - not even close. This is truly fabulous!!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you for your lovely review, Kay.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Excellent work with your ABCB rhyme. You make effect use of the dark clouds to refer to the dark periods in one's life. There is a warm glow from knowing that the sun is shining again. It is God's love that brings reassurance. This brings an optimistic tone. That is an excellent photo with a sky that really looks threatening. judi

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for your fine review.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Patricia,

You know, even before I read your Author's Notes, I knew that picture was taken in New Mexico. Those clouds were always so deceptive. The heat could be unbearable, and a few drops might hit the hot ground, but those clouds were just a tease.

Thank you for sharing this interpretation of Hebrews 13. He is there-ALWAYS,

~patty~

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for your fine review.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

very well written Pat, a fine testimonial of faith and it is written such an easy form, it invites the reader to join in. excellent...........meeshu

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for your fine review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a great testimony to God's faithfulness you give in this poem, Patricia. And you have moved in faith to your new home. Is that a picture of your new place or your old place?

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for your fine review.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Great photo, Patricia. I've been in Las Cruces several times. The west is truly beautiful. Are you have in your relocation? Nicely composed poem that I enjoyed reading. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for your fine review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your stormy day photograph to parallel the mood of your rhymed quatrains. I am glad you are able to see past strife to better days ahead. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for your fine review.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

Another beautiful poem. So warm, inspirational, uplifting. Well-written with a nice steady flow. A definite keeper in Pat's bookcase of poems. Thank you for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for your fine review.

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

This lovely poem is evidence of true faith, and an honest statement of one's faith is the best poetry there is. Thank you for sharing this, Patricia, and have a blessed day!

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for your fine review.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 29-Jun-2018

You're welcome.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and well written, true poem you have penned about our Lord. He never slumbers, nor sleeps. He is always with us. I am very thankful for that every day. Very good words and very nice picture. I hope you are enjoying your move my friend! love, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for your fine review.