Comment from Tootie

Excellent

This is a great One Line Poem and the artwork compliments it well. Like the title (it drew me in) and love what you say here. Very well done. Yes, very encouraging. Thank you! Blessings, Cathy

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

This is a fantastic one-liner, my friend. I love the picture you chose to accompany it, it's very complimentary. It is an encouraging line. Good luck! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

Thank you for your very encouraging review****kahpot

Comment from Shanbreen

Excellent

Wow, Kahpot. What a profound one line statement. And you have a perfect visual to go with it. Very well done. You have a very clever mind. I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

My thoughts exactly. I have a lot of unborn perfection in me but I seldom let it out..as my poems will attest to. This poem expressed the art of writing perfectly.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

I agree with you. Dabbling with different forms serves as a sort of reorientation.
While words and concepts are constants, forms give us new challenges.
Your poem is apt. I do wonder, however, why the P in Perfection is capitalized?

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

Thank you and the "p" was not meant to be capitalized, many thanks****kahpot

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Hi Kahpot
I really like this one line poem. It really does say it all in just six well chosen words. I do think that so often the shorter the poem the more creative it is.(if it makes sense of course) some don't but this soooo does. Could be a winner, hope so. Good luck. Nice one. Cheers Jen.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018

Thank you very much for your encouraging review****kahpot

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi kahpot. This is a good entry for the contest. Guess I am lazy. Not much into different forms unless it is for contests. I remember saying in a review that one of Pantygynt's Tankas was perfection. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. I am glad you are exploring the different forms of poetry

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018

Thank you very much and yes and it is fun****kahpot

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Oh how you've packed an evening's worth of thought into a single line and even made it rhyme and rhythm.


Superb entry and I wish you great luck. This is really beautiful.

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018

Thank you very much, it is your and others help that inspire us to have ago****kahpot

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

FanStory a place to hone your skills on you way to your writing perfection.we are all here to help each other along the way and people her are willing to help.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018

I totally agree thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Rose King1

Excellent

This was really good. I thank you for your encouragement. I have yet to try my hand and all the many different forms but I'm working on it. "Unborn Perfection" Well done. I wish luck in the competition. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018

Thank you very much and yes have ago it really is fun and there is always something to learn****kahpot