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Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'One Line Poem' writing prompt.
Your short verse says it all in one line.
Nicely done and I wish you luck in the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'One Line Poem' writing prompt.
Your short verse says it all in one line.
Nicely done and I wish you luck in the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Dean Kuch
While we might write a new form of poetry we've decided to try correctly the very first time out, it's still true what they say: "Practice makes perfect."
The Shakespearean sonnet was particularly difficult for me. It's a very intricate, highly structured poetic form.
The more forms you study, practice, and eventually write the more well-rounded poet you will be.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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While we might write a new form of poetry we've decided to try correctly the very first time out, it's still true what they say: "Practice makes perfect."
The Shakespearean sonnet was particularly difficult for me. It's a very intricate, highly structured poetic form.
The more forms you study, practice, and eventually write the more well-rounded poet you will be.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much and yes I am trying to study this sonnet as your previous suggestion, very tricky****kahpot
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Good luck! :)
Comment from Michael Steinert
I love the message of this poem! There are so many styles I would never have tried without certain prompts. I know my writing style can be on the darker side but some prompts encourage the opposite or some allow me to explore my style in a new way. Excellent entry!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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I love the message of this poem! There are so many styles I would never have tried without certain prompts. I know my writing style can be on the darker side but some prompts encourage the opposite or some allow me to explore my style in a new way. Excellent entry!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, yes it is great fun experimenting with new ways****kahpot
Comment from Lady Jane
I struggle reviewing the short poems. Really. What can you review? The style, the color, the picture, the few words used to convey your inner most thoughts, but this one. WOW. Just wow. You've nailed writing on the head, music, science, all the forms of evolving self, in one line/13 syllables. I hope you win. This one will be a very strong contender for sure. Good luck. Image appreciate, subject, profound, structure/adhered to contest rules! Winner :)
Janelle
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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I struggle reviewing the short poems. Really. What can you review? The style, the color, the picture, the few words used to convey your inner most thoughts, but this one. WOW. Just wow. You've nailed writing on the head, music, science, all the forms of evolving self, in one line/13 syllables. I hope you win. This one will be a very strong contender for sure. Good luck. Image appreciate, subject, profound, structure/adhered to contest rules! Winner :)
Janelle
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much and yes it is hard to review so short a poem, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Every poet's dream is to be creating perfection. This is a very good poem for the Tell a One Line Poem contest. I'm sure it will do very well in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Every poet's dream is to be creating perfection. This is a very good poem for the Tell a One Line Poem contest. I'm sure it will do very well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good one linear Kapot I like how you said in so few words that Explore form selection of formats there are to pick from
(but I don't understand you say releases unborn perfection?)
Question why can't one make make it born to be perfection
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Good one linear Kapot I like how you said in so few words that Explore form selection of formats there are to pick from
(but I don't understand you say releases unborn perfection?)
Question why can't one make make it born to be perfection
Gert
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you, Gert, I guess I was trying to say release what is still inside of us, and my other excuse is it was originally a six-word poem, I do like your suggestion, this is what I need to hear to help me, many thanks****kahpot
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You are welcome *kahpot
And TY for noticing my suggestion in a question
Gert
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem. Each form is a challenge that we can conquer when we set our mind to do the best we can and learn and follow the rooms, and at the same time we have lots of fun.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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A very well-written one-line poem. Each form is a challenge that we can conquer when we set our mind to do the best we can and learn and follow the rooms, and at the same time we have lots of fun.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, and it is fun learning here much more so than at school****kahpot
Comment from Air Spirit
Beautifully penned and wise and encouraging words... encouraging others to try different writing forms, to put your thoughts, feelings and desires out there, and let them find the form that works best for them... each form accents a different element of the poem, and highlights or subdues other parts of it... you have said a great deal in a very limited amount of space -- a meaningful, memorable and insightful poem. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Beautifully penned and wise and encouraging words... encouraging others to try different writing forms, to put your thoughts, feelings and desires out there, and let them find the form that works best for them... each form accents a different element of the poem, and highlights or subdues other parts of it... you have said a great deal in a very limited amount of space -- a meaningful, memorable and insightful poem. Excellent job!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from victor 66
I do appreciate your gesture and I can't help but feel that the simplicity of your seven words are well selected. I've been on this web site for quite sometime. Sometimes I rest for awhile but I always return. I suspect your writing and positive outlook are one of the reasons I enjoy being here. Best wishes, Kahpot.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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I do appreciate your gesture and I can't help but feel that the simplicity of your seven words are well selected. I've been on this web site for quite sometime. Sometimes I rest for awhile but I always return. I suspect your writing and positive outlook are one of the reasons I enjoy being here. Best wishes, Kahpot.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
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You are most welcome, Kahpot.
Comment from The Death
Lovely poem! Fine use of internal rhyme in this one liner. The rhyming doesn't feel forced. It's true that as we explore new forms, we get to know which one suits our style. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Lovely poem! Fine use of internal rhyme in this one liner. The rhyming doesn't feel forced. It's true that as we explore new forms, we get to know which one suits our style. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, it does help to understand, many thanks****kahpot
