Executive Rapist
A free verse poem15 total reviews
Comment from Air Spirit
Excellent commentary on greed, power, control and corruption... you nailed it girl! You were right on point -- and exemplified these ugly, morally debilitating character defects that taint human decency and defile innocence and purity of heart... Powerful poem!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Excellent commentary on greed, power, control and corruption... you nailed it girl! You were right on point -- and exemplified these ugly, morally debilitating character defects that taint human decency and defile innocence and purity of heart... Powerful poem!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Thank you Cynthia. I originally wrote this one 44 years ago! Thanks for the wonderful review
Comment from Deirdre Anne Gialamas
Dear Pamusart,
This free verse speaks of a common truth which
you have presented in a most engaging manner.
The mataphors used are excellent.
'He controls the corporate erection.' Brilliant!
Best wishes, 'Deirdre Anne
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Dear Pamusart,
This free verse speaks of a common truth which
you have presented in a most engaging manner.
The mataphors used are excellent.
'He controls the corporate erection.' Brilliant!
Best wishes, 'Deirdre Anne
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Thank you Deirdre for such a great review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have known a few of these during my working days in offices! I liked your free-write and you are good at them, very expressive and poignant, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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I have known a few of these during my working days in offices! I liked your free-write and you are good at them, very expressive and poignant, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thank you Dolly for such a great review. Much appreciated
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a clever piece of political free verse. The metaphor is most apt and the link between the politicians and captains of industry or if you prefer it, execitive rapists is well-established here.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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This is a clever piece of political free verse. The metaphor is most apt and the link between the politicians and captains of industry or if you prefer it, execitive rapists is well-established here.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thanks Jim for your wonderful review. Much appreciated
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Well Pam, well said, I couldn't have said it any better than that. Those are some powerful words that have been well put into context of the liar and reported RAPIST. Who seduces the POWER of the personal opinions of those that surrounds him. Good job Pam
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Well Pam, well said, I couldn't have said it any better than that. Those are some powerful words that have been well put into context of the liar and reported RAPIST. Who seduces the POWER of the personal opinions of those that surrounds him. Good job Pam
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thank you Mary for your wonderful review. Much appreciated
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My pleasure
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about people who have money and power think they have the right to abuse other people in any way and hush everybody from speaking out.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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A very well-written poem about people who have money and power think they have the right to abuse other people in any way and hush everybody from speaking out.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thank you Sandra for a great review
Comment from Gloria ....
That's what I like about you, Pam. You don't mince words and boy have you ever hit the nail on this head with this hard hitting post. The lobbyists, bankers and mega-wealthy are about to become a whole lot wealthier, but I guess to some folks it feels good.
A fine free verse with all the vivid nouns and verbs in the right places.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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That's what I like about you, Pam. You don't mince words and boy have you ever hit the nail on this head with this hard hitting post. The lobbyists, bankers and mega-wealthy are about to become a whole lot wealthier, but I guess to some folks it feels good.
A fine free verse with all the vivid nouns and verbs in the right places.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thanks Gloria. I always appreciate you detailed reviews. This one is lovely
Comment from meeshu
a true and timely write, Pam. can you believe what President Clinton said last week? I will get the exact quote if you haven't heard it. it is too outrageous to get wrong..............meeshu
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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a true and timely write, Pam. can you believe what President Clinton said last week? I will get the exact quote if you haven't heard it. it is too outrageous to get wrong..............meeshu
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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OK. I am not exactly a fan of the Clintons. Bill or Hillary? Thank you for the great review
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"it seems the rules have changed about what you can do to women against their will" (explaining why he got away with it.)
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I think I heard that.
Comment from royowen
Although it's a little hackneyed, but power corrupts, but absolute power corrupts absolutely, well done, the metaphorical phalus is a good descriptive analogy, well done Pam, an excellent poem in free verse form, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Although it's a little hackneyed, but power corrupts, but absolute power corrupts absolutely, well done, the metaphorical phalus is a good descriptive analogy, well done Pam, an excellent poem in free verse form, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you Roy. Agreed about hackneyed. That is why that is only mentioned in my notes. Thanks for the great review
Comment from kahpot
How true is that and unfortunately there are far too many of these people in the world, I believe they should be treated as criminals, very well said and written****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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How true is that and unfortunately there are far too many of these people in the world, I believe they should be treated as criminals, very well said and written****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Agreed about criminality. Thanks for the lovely review
