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Chain Migration

An example of chain migration

13 total reviews 
Comment from Pantygynt
Exceptional
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The following is inscribed on a a plaque affixed to the Statue of Liberty. Has anyone rubbed Donald's nose in it recently? Splendid poem and notes to accompany. I wasn't aware that Donald's blood line was so steeped in racism, but I can't say I am surprised.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
    Wow. Thank you Jim so much for the extra star. Made my day. Lots of trump
    Fans skipping this one. I knew that
    would happen. Thanks for the great review
Comment from tfawcus
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I have read many opinions expressed about President Trump but few as well researched and as telling as yours. Expertly rendered in rhymed couplets of iambic hexameter. Congratulations.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
    Wow. Thank
    You so much for the extra star. Thank you also for your wonderful review. This one took a lot of research
    Thank you for a great review
Comment from karenina
Exceptional
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This is a well researched, factual, emotional, rational poem about irrational decisions and policies being put in place by a man who in every way possible reaped the benefits of his ancestors being accepted and assimilated into this country he is now the president of. There is no reasoning. Only division and fear mongering and fueling the fire of hate and intolerance in his immigration policies. Yet he praised Putin, refuses to confront North Korea on the worst human rights violations since the Holocaust. He is not fit for office and America is NOT the country he portrays--full of apathetic anti-immigration souls. Thank you for speaking out against the injustice. we are either silent or part of the solution. Let's be part of the solution.

Six Stars. Poetry has a long history of being a voice against social travesty...

Karenina

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    You inspired this, girlfriend. I was hoping to reach some people with you Jesus analogy. Also wanted to show trump?s history of chain migration. He probably sponsored all three wives. Thanks so much for the extra star. Much appreciated. Thank you also for your wonderful review
reply by karenina on 24-Jun-2018
    You earned it...let me know if you get any push back on this.....
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    So far just one person saying why don?t the migrants come in legally? That is why I added the not about trump forcing them into coming in illegally. He closed or severely shortened hours at the places they can enter legally
Comment from meeshu
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this is a great work, Pam so original and so full of progressive insanity, lunatic ramblings and knee-jerk hand-wringing. I Love It, a fantastic read........meeshu

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Lol. Meeshu you are too funny. Trump only exists due to chain migration. Thanks for the great review
Comment from jdrhye
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Great history of the Trump family heritage maybe someone should remind him where he came from. Although it does not make sense it is akene to Hitler and his background history and heritage. Narsacist and sociopaths alike makes one wonder!
Nice poem very informative and well articulated. It's sad and disturbing how easily history repeats itself. The world has been fighting over the same issues for decades, generations and centuries. Racism, equality, power, religion and land. Thank you for your percpective and sharing your knowledge.
J

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Hi jdrhye. Nice to see you tonight. Thanks for the great review
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Wow.
Your verse tells quite a story.
It's really hard to see how people like the Trumps can get away with what they are doing. This is just a huge step back.
Well done, well told.
Sharon

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you Sharon. It was quite the effort. But I had to do it. Thanks for the great review
Comment from RGstar
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It wasn't easy to grasp all, as it is a detailed history and one of many turns, yet, one can feel the richness and the period which has its connection to events which we all know of.
I suspect this holds you very near.
There are much injustices in the world, and too, I suspect we have not seen the last.
Best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you RGstar for this excellent review
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This has a powerful message here with several messages intertwined and interwoven into the theme of this. You've done a fine job of bringing forth the immigration dilemma. I also like the point about the immigrants getting here and then not wanting to rent to certain people. I really like how well you've wrote and presented this well written poem. Very well done Pam!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Hi Jeffrey. I have missed you! Yes this one took a lot of research. Thanks so much for the lovely review
Comment from Hugh McDowell
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Nice work. You won't get any argument from me. If anything, you are more kind than many who despise Trump. The poem gives a great background of the Trump family. The majority of us come from immigrant backgrounds. Thank you for sharing. I hope you ignore any haters on this. Your writing is very balanced. By the way, good pacing and flow on the poem. Reads very easy. Excellent job.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Hi, Hugh. I think the haters are just skipping. I had one person who did not understand why they HAVE to cross illegally. Trump has made sure they can?t legally claim asylum. He has closed that avenue. They are stuck at the border fir days or weeks with no money. Thank you for the great review
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Chain Migration, had me first thinking of the Puritans, who were kicked out of every country they went to until escaping to the New World and hanging all those witches. Then, when it was clear it was Trump, the 'chain migration' knowledge, because he's totally ignorant of anything that doesn't concern him personally, makes sense. He always, and I mean always, takes some negative that he has used and projects it on an opponent. Just as every thief considers everyone else a thief, so The Donald sees the world.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you Bill. I know some will not like this. Thanks for a great review