A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hahaha ... delightful humor in this piece, Craig! This poem is so much fun and has a peppy beat to it. Luv it! You're using up all my sixes today!
"My down and dirty dancing is a knockout with the chicks,
and though they'd gladly pay me, I just do it for the kicks." .... my favorite part! :)
There are those who might say, "A twist or a waltz, it's all the same schmaltz!", I say, "If you can Pase Doble and Tango, you deserve a mango". Dancing With The Stars would love this guy!
You're on a roll, Craig! Great poem! ~~ Connie
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Hahaha ... delightful humor in this piece, Craig! This poem is so much fun and has a peppy beat to it. Luv it! You're using up all my sixes today!
"My down and dirty dancing is a knockout with the chicks,
and though they'd gladly pay me, I just do it for the kicks." .... my favorite part! :)
There are those who might say, "A twist or a waltz, it's all the same schmaltz!", I say, "If you can Pase Doble and Tango, you deserve a mango". Dancing With The Stars would love this guy!
You're on a roll, Craig! Great poem! ~~ Connie
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thanks for the wonderful comments and rating, Connie (again!)
Sadly, I'm not that guy. If there was a "daggy dancing" contest, I'd win every time :)
Most appreciated - Craig
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This poem is great fun! I so loved John Travolta and your rhymes are spot on with great flow, I was on the dance floor with you! I felt your Maia for dancing and the disco music was pumping, a great write, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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This poem is great fun! I so loved John Travolta and your rhymes are spot on with great flow, I was on the dance floor with you! I felt your Maia for dancing and the disco music was pumping, a great write, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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If only it were the truth, Dolly. Sadly, in reality I have not two, but about fourteen left feet :) Many thanks for the delightful review - Craig
Comment from Deirdre Anne Gialamas
Dear C D,
I really enjoyed your poem. It was so well written and the rhythm
so musical it danced all along. It was super funny and
so refreshing, great language use, just spot-on.
Warmest wishes, Deirdre Anne
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Dear C D,
I really enjoyed your poem. It was so well written and the rhythm
so musical it danced all along. It was super funny and
so refreshing, great language use, just spot-on.
Warmest wishes, Deirdre Anne
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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I'm very honoured by the delightful comments and the wonderful rating, Deirdre Anne. Also, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Most grateful, Craig
