A Trail Less Taken
My Brother Painted This... I want to honor him.76 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Art, your 20 syllable poem is beautiful with good use of alliteration in 'Splashes of succulents'. Good 'S' sound throughout. Your brother's painting is gorgeous and it suits your words so well. Lovely overall display. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Hi Art, your 20 syllable poem is beautiful with good use of alliteration in 'Splashes of succulents'. Good 'S' sound throughout. Your brother's painting is gorgeous and it suits your words so well. Lovely overall display. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Hey Dorothy... thanks so much for your thoughtful and helpful review. It is very appreciated. yours, diana
Comment from LaFrance
I really enjoyed you twenty syllable poem. It has a nice summery feel and your word choice gave a nice warm color, yet the ending word "Divine" seamed to me a little off rhythm. Very nice piece.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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I really enjoyed you twenty syllable poem. It has a nice summery feel and your word choice gave a nice warm color, yet the ending word "Divine" seamed to me a little off rhythm. Very nice piece.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Hey again... Summery is good... your are so appreciated and it makes me happy you reviewed. yours, diana
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your brother painted an amazing scene & your few syllables, as required, do honor him. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good job & thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Your brother painted an amazing scene & your few syllables, as required, do honor him. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good job & thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Hey Jan again... what a treat... I'm humbled and honored. yours, diana
Comment from Phil Czekner
Explore the path that is off the beaten trail! One never knows what you might find when you go that route. It reminds me that we all need to take the time and find those hidden treasures.
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Explore the path that is off the beaten trail! One never knows what you might find when you go that route. It reminds me that we all need to take the time and find those hidden treasures.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Hey Phil...thanks so much for your thoughtful and helpful review. It is very appreciated. yours, diana
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a very delightful 20 syllable poem. You and your brother are extremely talanted and I love the inclusion of his work, my friend. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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This is a very delightful 20 syllable poem. You and your brother are extremely talanted and I love the inclusion of his work, my friend. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Hey dejohnsrld or debbie...thanks so much for your thoughtful and helpful review. It is very appreciated. yours, diana
Comment from Michele Harber
Your brother should be proud. You stuck to the 20-syllable limit while creating your own beautiful picture with your words, fully complementing your brother's artwork. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Your brother should be proud. You stuck to the 20-syllable limit while creating your own beautiful picture with your words, fully complementing your brother's artwork. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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I'm proud of him too... thanks so much for your thoughtful and helpful review. It is very appreciated. yours, diana
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My sister can do amazing things with pen and ink, so I can fully relate to your being proud of your sibling's artistic prowess. You chose a lovely way to show it.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Sometimes the road less traveled is the way to go because it's hidden away and peaceful. Sometimes it's the hiddenness that makes it that much more special. I saw a post and it was conversation about why they took the road less traveled when they knew it'd be harder. The response was that they didn't see a second, easier road, sometimes we're just meant to find those things.
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Sometimes the road less traveled is the way to go because it's hidden away and peaceful. Sometimes it's the hiddenness that makes it that much more special. I saw a post and it was conversation about why they took the road less traveled when they knew it'd be harder. The response was that they didn't see a second, easier road, sometimes we're just meant to find those things.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Hey ExperiencingLiphe... thanks so much for your thoughtful and helpful review. It is very appreciated. yours, diana
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a gorgeous poem and a gorgeous painting - so reminiscent of my father's paintings - wish I could give you Ten Stars for this short and memorable poem - one written for the ages...
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In my opinion, a gorgeous poem and a gorgeous painting - so reminiscent of my father's paintings - wish I could give you Ten Stars for this short and memorable poem - one written for the ages...
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Hi everashi... great to see you twice in one day and i'm eternally grateful for your stellar/plus-one review. Thank you Thank you... yours, di
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You are so welcome, Di, and I thank you for my superb experience...Eve
Comment from Yemima Kebede1
This poem is great! Well done! I love the last line-- "golden slumber's divine". Thank you for sharing this poem. Keep up the great work that you do and I hope you have a blessed day! Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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This poem is great! Well done! I love the last line-- "golden slumber's divine". Thank you for sharing this poem. Keep up the great work that you do and I hope you have a blessed day! Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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thanks so much for your thoughtful and helpful review. It is very appreciated. yours, diana
Comment from Nanny 6
Awesome description of your brother's art. Your artistic poetry meshes well with the art itself. Outstanding. I feel like the picture came to life. It brought many feelings of warmth and pleasure when I read it. : )
Judy
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Awesome description of your brother's art. Your artistic poetry meshes well with the art itself. Outstanding. I feel like the picture came to life. It brought many feelings of warmth and pleasure when I read it. : )
Judy
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Nanny I am honored by your stellar/plus-one review... thanks so much for your thoughtful and helpful review. It is very appreciated. yours, diana
