A Child's Imagination
Potlatch Challenge A Terza Rima12 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Nicely done with your Terza Rima poem June about encouraging children's imaginations through stories. Lovely rhyming true to form, enjoyed it.
cheers.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Nicely done with your Terza Rima poem June about encouraging children's imaginations through stories. Lovely rhyming true to form, enjoyed it.
cheers.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018
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Appreciate your stopping by to read and review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love all the children's stories and all those you mention here are a joy for adults too. Never let there be a time when we do not let our imagination run wild and free, your poem is freedom and liberty for our imagination, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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I love all the children's stories and all those you mention here are a joy for adults too. Never let there be a time when we do not let our imagination run wild and free, your poem is freedom and liberty for our imagination, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thank you, Dolly, for your support and encouraging comments.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, June,
Thank you for sharing this lovely Terza Rima in response to the Potlatch challenge. I think the sentiment behind these words is so very true. It seems that if the initial bud of creativity isn't nurtured, a child will turn away from honing the craft.
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Hi, June,
Thank you for sharing this lovely Terza Rima in response to the Potlatch challenge. I think the sentiment behind these words is so very true. It seems that if the initial bud of creativity isn't nurtured, a child will turn away from honing the craft.
~patty~
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for sharing your input. Always appreciate your feedback.
Comment from kiwijenny
Seeds of creativity should be well placed,
lest a young child's mind withers and goes to waste.
I so believe this as I teach 4 year olds I make them do creative writing every day. Oh how they improve through the year
God bless
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Seeds of creativity should be well placed,
lest a young child's mind withers and goes to waste.
I so believe this as I teach 4 year olds I make them do creative writing every day. Oh how they improve through the year
God bless
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review my terza rima. It was out of my comfort zone to meet this potlatch challenge but I learned something. Old or young, we need to keep our creative juices going!
Comment from mkflood
Yeah I want to be an illustrator when I grow up! Evil grin..oh I just couldn't resist..lol. I do thank you for my work. It an honor to be included with yours. Great job and thanks again.. MKFLOOD
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Yeah I want to be an illustrator when I grow up! Evil grin..oh I just couldn't resist..lol. I do thank you for my work. It an honor to be included with yours. Great job and thanks again.. MKFLOOD
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for sharing your artwork - it went very well with my terza rima challenge. And apparently you have no trouble putting your imagination to good use!
Comment from Ricky1024
"A Child's Imagination"
was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were excellent and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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"A Child's Imagination"
was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were excellent and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Appreciate very much your dropping by to read and review my effort at a terza rima!
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello June, this is a lovely addition to the potlatch group. I enjoyed it the moment I came in, the lovely picture and imaginative words about imagination and what it would be like without it, and how children have it in their lives without thinking about it.
Strong ending: Seeds of creativity should be well placed,
lest a young child's mind withers and goes to waste.
I think it is so important to make good choices when young, even though you can always change at any point, but good habits practiced early leads to a healthy and happy life.
Nothing jarred and thank you for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Hello June, this is a lovely addition to the potlatch group. I enjoyed it the moment I came in, the lovely picture and imaginative words about imagination and what it would be like without it, and how children have it in their lives without thinking about it.
Strong ending: Seeds of creativity should be well placed,
lest a young child's mind withers and goes to waste.
I think it is so important to make good choices when young, even though you can always change at any point, but good habits practiced early leads to a healthy and happy life.
Nothing jarred and thank you for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Appreciate very much your dropping by to read and review my effort at a terza rima!
Comment from D. K. Mamula
Very well-written! I agree with you about fostering creativity and imagination in children. I did so with my son when he was young, encouraging him to read, taking him to the library, which he loved, and allowing him to invent his own games and imaginary worlds.
Your use of rhyme is excelent and creative. Well done!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Very well-written! I agree with you about fostering creativity and imagination in children. I did so with my son when he was young, encouraging him to read, taking him to the library, which he loved, and allowing him to invent his own games and imaginary worlds.
Your use of rhyme is excelent and creative. Well done!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much for sharing your insights and for the generous rating!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great challenge poem, June. Your expressed your topic well. Good job on the style of the terza rima. You did a great job with enjambment, too. Your poem tells a great story of imagination & how important it is to your children. You used some great rhymes--stagnation/imagination, cripples/ripples/triples . . .
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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This is a great challenge poem, June. Your expressed your topic well. Good job on the style of the terza rima. You did a great job with enjambment, too. Your poem tells a great story of imagination & how important it is to your children. You used some great rhymes--stagnation/imagination, cripples/ripples/triples . . .
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you for offering the challenge. I have learned so much from this club. I hope you will continue to inspire us to get out of our comfort zones!
Comment from lyenochka
Good thoughts about the importance of imagination in a child's growth. But from the allusions of the books and the TV shows, I would say it is relevant to adults, too!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Good thoughts about the importance of imagination in a child's growth. But from the allusions of the books and the TV shows, I would say it is relevant to adults, too!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Imagination keeps us young at heart!
