Creation Day
Imagine yourself witnessing the creation of the universe.30 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Wow, that was really a wonderful and powerful thought. Very well described and in perfect rhyme. Very enjoyable to read as well as being a brilliant idea.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Wow, that was really a wonderful and powerful thought. Very well described and in perfect rhyme. Very enjoyable to read as well as being a brilliant idea.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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I truly appreciate your sharing ?Creation Day,? frogbook, and delighted you enjoyed it so much. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Sherman541
This is very beautiful. The picture is perfect and the you paint the pictures in a way that anyone can see what you portray. Very Nicely done. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest!! Sherman541
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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This is very beautiful. The picture is perfect and the you paint the pictures in a way that anyone can see what you portray. Very Nicely done. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest!! Sherman541
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, Sherman541, for sharing ?Creation Day? and your kind praise. Rod
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You are most welcome ;) have not been much as of late - sorry for the slow response
Comment from rspoet
Hello Rod,
This is an excellent poem and subject for imagination.
The creation is an intriguing topic. I enjoyed reading your idea...
it all begins with light.
Nicely rhymed with marvelous art work
Well done
Robert
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Hello Rod,
This is an excellent poem and subject for imagination.
The creation is an intriguing topic. I enjoyed reading your idea...
it all begins with light.
Nicely rhymed with marvelous art work
Well done
Robert
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my take on Creation Day, Robert. Thank you for sharing and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Excellent painting choice and good presentation.
-You have a well penned poem for the contest, RodG.
-I like how your poem tells a story of
witnessing God's work.
-The imagery is very good:
"and spoke four startling words aloud."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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-Excellent painting choice and good presentation.
-You have a well penned poem for the contest, RodG.
-I like how your poem tells a story of
witnessing God's work.
-The imagery is very good:
"and spoke four startling words aloud."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed both my poem and the accompanying artwork, Pam. Thank you for sharing and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from HaleyBel
Wonderful, exhilarating, I really enjoyed your poem and connected with every verse.
Good luck in the contest, if you have entered, as this poem is a winner.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Wonderful, exhilarating, I really enjoyed your poem and connected with every verse.
Good luck in the contest, if you have entered, as this poem is a winner.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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I am delighted by your enthusiastic response to ?Creation Day,? HaleyBel, and truly appreciate the six-star bonus. Rod
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Very intense and this piece would have stood alone without the pic, but great that you put them together. It is strong and vivid. Creative, great flow. The action within is felt and powerful. I do not often review religious themed poetry as I feel unqualified to go there, but this sort of pulled me in. Great job!!
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Very intense and this piece would have stood alone without the pic, but great that you put them together. It is strong and vivid. Creative, great flow. The action within is felt and powerful. I do not often review religious themed poetry as I feel unqualified to go there, but this sort of pulled me in. Great job!!
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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I am so pleased this poem drew you in, Wendy, and that you enjoyed the experience. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Air Spirit
Excellent poem and painting! The picture depicts exactly what your words convey in your poem... starting off in darkness, then the brilliant transition to the creation of life "...It seems I'm in the darkest cave
that's bitter cold, pitch-black and vast.
Then suddenly a brilliance bursts,
illuminates, leaves me aghast.." Your theme on actually being there with God, when the world was created is fascinating and so entertaining... it really does leave me wondering ... "...I imagine...." Great poem!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Excellent poem and painting! The picture depicts exactly what your words convey in your poem... starting off in darkness, then the brilliant transition to the creation of life "...It seems I'm in the darkest cave
that's bitter cold, pitch-black and vast.
Then suddenly a brilliance bursts,
illuminates, leaves me aghast.." Your theme on actually being there with God, when the world was created is fascinating and so entertaining... it really does leave me wondering ... "...I imagine...." Great poem!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much, Air Spirit, for youreffusive praise of ?Creation Day.? I am thrilled I could put you there. Rod
Comment from kahpot
What a brilliant writer and very well written with a great "Imagination" of how we are here very well done with wonderful artwork to enhance, good luck in you competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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What a brilliant writer and very well written with a great "Imagination" of how we are here very well done with wonderful artwork to enhance, good luck in you competition****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much, kahpot, for your wonderful praise of ?Creation Day.? Rod
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Rod. My goodness I haven't seen any posting by you in a long time. Better you do this than rattle off ten poems a week. I m sure you put some thought into this one and it shows, my friend. Good job. I especially liked these lines:
Then placing Light between His palms,
God rolled it round till it became
a molten mass of fiery dust.
"I call this Sun!" He did exclaim."
Bravo, Rod. Bob
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Hi, Rod. My goodness I haven't seen any posting by you in a long time. Better you do this than rattle off ten poems a week. I m sure you put some thought into this one and it shows, my friend. Good job. I especially liked these lines:
Then placing Light between His palms,
God rolled it round till it became
a molten mass of fiery dust.
"I call this Sun!" He did exclaim."
Bravo, Rod. Bob
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Hi Bob. I truly appreciate your very kind praise of ?Creation Day? and those six bright stars. You may not have seen many of my postings because I enter mostly ?blind? contests. Rod
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Okay. Let me know when you are posting them would you mind, if you can remember that is.
:) Bob
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Okay. Let me know when you are posting them would you mind, if you can remember that is.
:) Bob
Comment from Artasylum
This was lovely... Iove your concept of Gods' first day and speaking out "Let There Be Light" this is very nice. Good luck in the contest. always looking forward to more posts... yours, diana
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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This was lovely... Iove your concept of Gods' first day and speaking out "Let There Be Light" this is very nice. Good luck in the contest. always looking forward to more posts... yours, diana
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you, Diana, for your very kind praise of ?Creation Day.? Rod
